[Report This]Date: 03-18-04 - 06:00 pm Title: One
I just can't wait to see what happens next!!! Oh and what was that Ro yelled at Logan? Towards the end when they were arguing?
Author's Response: (Nem giggles maniacally into her hands bent over her keyboard. She wiggles her fingers at the screen willing -- no, compelling! -- TigerStorm to come back for part two for any and all answers that may be had. Then Nem continues to giggle into her palm...) :)
[Report This]Date: 03-18-04 - 02:16 pm Title: One
That was really wonderful. The way you phrase things is just beautiful. Everything flowed very nicely, and it didn't seem rushed at all. I can't wait to read the next installment of this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. And I'm glad that it didn't feel rushed to you. It's just hard to deal with bad vibes and a breakup fight is never good mojo. I kept avoiding and avoiding... I look forward to getting more of your feedback in the future with each installment as well.
[Report This]Date: 03-18-04 - 09:56 am Title: One
you're goOd. don't ever not write.
Author's Response: So I get to work and see this as my review... I breathe a deep thankful breath that my fitful sleep in my anxiety of whether or not anyone would like the story was just ker-ray-zee. Thanks so much, Nickel. I really appreciate it. I feel a little less crazy today.
[Report This]Date: 03-17-04 - 11:48 pm Title: One
I'm speechless...that was breathtaking. It didn't seem rushed or incomplete or anything. Wow. That was...poetry. Incredible. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: AtheD... we like AtheD. Thanks for reviewing. It took a lot out of me, the last part did. I guess, much as in real life, it so much easier to bring two people together than break them apart. Curious... any confusions you experienced during this initial read?
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