Love this wonderful story, update soon. ;)

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

...please tell me you're going to update this. It's fabulous. The mood is pitch perfect, the love scene was great, and Logan's perspective and different realizations throughout this story that he was an idiot for letting her go feel genuine. What I want to see more than anything, I think, is her confronting him with her feelings about him sneaking out of the hotel. That and that night in the kitchen. More, please.

so when do we get to read "Found Journal"? I've been waiting for it for over a year now!

this is so good. i like it no love it. you are awesome! cannot wait unti lyou post up the found journal.... sounds good!

this story is really sad nut good and i would also like to see what happens if Ororo does come back if she doesnt i dont no where u r goin with the story. great but sad is all i can say.

My Goodness... After rereading from second chapter to this, you do see the progression and escalation of the passion, the want, the absolute tension between Ro and Lo, especially Logan's. The madness of wanting someone but never saying or doing anything about it. And then it happens - in a flurry, a passionate haze. You wrotet the love scene so beautifully that the reader is caught up in the emotions behind it, not neccesarily the act - which I enjoyed. And although we are not in Ororo's head during these events, the way you wrote this, her feelings are clear. And because of that, we can bring everything full circle and see her impending devestation. And we feel it along with her. They are so human... you wrote them that way. (sigh) Yes, an update is needed. This is too thick now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. Sorry it took so long for the update but it was really hard to write this chapter and took a long time. I will try to update faster this next time.