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Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-08 - 04:50 am Title: Choices & Decisions, pt. 2

Ok, I'm going to say this first. Echo, I've been reading quite a few of your stories. I've been enjoying them a lot and I think you have a lot of talent as a writer.

But I have to say this for the love of god, please stop using w/ and & in place of the actual words. It is nothing worst for me when i'm sitting enjoying a chapter but then i cringe when i see w/ in a sentence.

w/ is not a word. Its a short-hand statement that's in messages and texting. It has no place in any body of work.

Also & should only be used with placing two names together making them a pair or a couple. Such as Batman & Robin. Or Cloak & Dagger. It does not replace and in a sentence because because once again its not an actual word.

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-02-08 - 06:27 pm Title: Summer Moved On, Pt. 3

Great update :)

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-02-08 - 03:15 pm Title: Summer Moved On, Pt. 2

I was just thinking about you and this fic the other day, wondering if you were ever going to update it again. Imagine my surprise when I saw not one, but TWO chapters to indulge in! I adore the way you write and this chapter was wonderful to read.

[i]*on to the next chapter*[/i]

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-02-08 - 12:39 pm Title: Summer Moved On, Pt. 3

All this heartbreaking emotion and angst, then you leave us those hysterical author's notes at the end. You're a wicked, evil girl.

Author's Response: LOL, yeah Cee i know. It was really hard writing these two, so i had to do SOMEthing to make myself feel better.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-02-08 - 12:30 pm Title: Summer Moved On, Pt. 2

*sits staring with mouth hanging open*

Echo's back, Echo's BACK!!! Woo-hoo!

*runs to next chapter*

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-08 - 02:16 pm Title: Summer Moved On, Pt. 3

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.


Author's Response: Hi! Thanks Dragon. I've kinda hit upon a spurt so I'm trying to ride it out as long as I can--hopefully to see this fic completed in the (very) near future.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-18-07 - 09:56 pm Title: Summer Moved On, pt. 1

This story has been very interesting. I loved how love grew between Ororo and Logan. And it was interesting seeing Jean as a sympathetic figure. What happened to Charles and where do Ororo and Logan go now. What does the military have planned for Logan now.?

Will you be working on this story any more? I sure hope so.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-14-07 - 07:23 pm Title: Summer Moved On, pt. 1

Ooh.....so that's why she died...man that's messed up. Good job with it I was totally surprised that's what went wrong. The appearance of Wolverine just about had me peein' my pants. Jean was quite the sympathetic figure. Well done.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-27-07 - 06:12 pm Title: Summer Moved On, pt. 1

that was...poweful.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-27-07 - 05:49 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 4

amazing chapter. i hope 'Ro does trust Jean enough to go help Logan.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-27-07 - 05:00 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

that was so sweet what T’Challa said. Its a good thing she has someone there to hold her hand, so to speak.

damn. That was intense. He killed or at the very least wounded them. That what's they getting for fucking with the Wolverine.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-27-07 - 01:58 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt.2

how did they know she was there to pick her up? poor Logan, so hurt, so conflicted.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-20-07 - 11:34 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt.1

not 'goodbye' damn....i dont see how 'Ro could forgive him after that but it doesnt seem that bad...it could be worse

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 03:08 pm Title: Summer Moved On, pt. 1

Oh and another add-on for my review. I think this chapter should have stopped after the last "I know". The emotional impact would have been far greater, and you could have kept the last bits (of very interesting) information for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 03:05 pm Title: Summer Moved On, pt. 1

Wow...wonderful! It made me cry....Beautifully written, and very vivid. I have just one request, stop using "w/" instead of with, the whole thing just takes you back to reality abruptly. Still one of the best fanfics i've ever read. Please update soon! And soon means soon! Or i'll hunt you down! ;)

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