Your writing style here is so very well done. You bring us right into the story without us having to go through the whole "well how powerful is she?" exposition. Your research and how you integrate it into this story is absolutely amazing. Just through the choreography of the dialogue, we are made aware of the relationship dynamics of the group and the possible conflicts that may arise. Your writing style has definitely improved. I am shaking my laptop hoping another chapter will just pop out or something. It's not working. UPDATE!

Getting very interesting. Can't wait for more.

i always love your fics, they get btter and better, i cat wait to see how this one turns out. if it's anythinglike the opening chaters it'll be wkd

Well...i guress u already know i like it...and that it's great. Although i can say i like the way u started, i mean it explaines where all the godesses came from. :) Hope u post another chappy soon.

Oh, me like. Now don't keep us sitting here in agony for too long, update soon ;-D

Yeah I'm the first reviewer! Interesting take so far. Can't wait to read more.