Ok, so it has been some years, but this is still one heck of a read, even unfinished. If by chance you read this review, I hope it spurs you if but a little...okay a lot to finish this. A A

That was a very moving chapter. I hope you write more very soon. I think this shows the pain and sorrow in all our lives, things we wish we could change in our past but most are unable or unwiling to take a chance and face them. That is the trully sad part when you fail to embrace the parts of your past that will in the long run a stronger person.

this is just starting ta get interesting ya gotta update soon please would love ta see the reaction when logan show's her his powers and vice-versa
keep up the good work

joe

Author's Response: I will try to get an update up soon. Now, that you mention it, i would also like to see both of their reactions to each other's mutant powers. The imagination train is on the tracks!

OOoo...Dark and violent RoLo story! I have to admit a sick predilection for 'em. And this one's looking to be at the top of that list. Well done!

I also have to commend you on turning the tables a bit here; showing that Logan isn't the only one who can have a dark side; the tho't of Ro being an assasin is one I've toyed with (never got around to writing it, tho); I'm glad you decided to make her character more somber/violent than usual. And Nightcrawler as her employer? Brilliant!

Hey, did I read correctly? Ro 'offed' Cyke for killing Charles? And does she already know Logan? Oh, I can't wait to find out!

Update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm blushing so hard my cheeks are on fire. If thats even possible. I'm glad you like the story. And yes, you did read right. Storm did kill Scott, but i'm sure he had his reason. Well, somewhere in my mind he did. And no, Ororo didn't know Logan before . But stay tuned for some twists and turns my minds a brewin'.

OMFG....I am...well, speechless. It's been too long between updates!! You have a tremndous gift and talent for the written word Layde. I can only hope you bless us with more updates soon. I loved the last of this. "I'd like that." OMG, and the poem was beautiful. This was deep on profound levels. I can't believe you worried about this!! *applauding*

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, Windrider. They are of course much appreicated. More updates shall be provided on a monthly basis. Well, hopefully.

Now that is just wrong, you can't leave us hanging like that it 's just wrong. Logan has to find Ororo so he can help her, because he cares for her and he knows she cares for him to.

Ororo needs to have her soul cleansed, and Logan is the key to her salvation. If she will only let him get close to her heart and soul he would gladly pull her from the dark and protect her from all who would hurt her.

I think this will be a good story when it starts to unfold a little more, when Logan comes in the picture.