

Date: 07-22-05 - 03:12 am Title: Prologue
holy hell, there's been an update? okay gonna go read it now *Cheeses*

Date: 12-07-04 - 04:17 pm Title: Prologue
I love it Pari!!! I absolutely adore this story... the characterizations are so good and the plot... amazing! keep it up girl!!!!

Date: 12-06-04 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Damn. where's the next chapter?

Date: 08-25-04 - 10:51 am Title: Prologue
I have read a lot of your stories and you have an amazing ablity to write. Girl you should write a book and get it published!Great job, cannot wait for more. -Dakota

Date: 08-25-04 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Damn, babe. I never thought that I would have ever read something so dark, demented, and horribly twisted from you. I am really shocked. Well, that just goes to show you that you have plenty of talent. Because I have seen other stories from you and this is way in the other direction than those went. You have a very wide range in your writing ability and that is great. Please, keep up the good work. Whoa, wait wait. I'm sorry. I meant to say keep up the great work.

Date: 08-23-04 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
So brutul, so warped, so REAL. This fic is different, and I like that. Something much more realistic and more close to home. I've been waiting for someone to have the guts to write something like this. Keep it up Pari.

Date: 08-18-04 - 08:57 am Title: Prologue
First of all, I can't believe ya killed off poor Hank. What my man do to you? LOL! But naah seriously, that story got me hooked. I'm likin the way its developing and it keeps drawing me in. I gotta have more, love. That is some damn good writing and I know it would be. I'd expect no less from my girl.

Date: 08-17-04 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just knew Ororo was going to be his new partner! This is interesting. I can't wait to read more of their 'partner ship', LOL.

Date: 08-16-04 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pari!!!! WTF!!!!!! What's that guy going to do to that little 7 year old????!!!!! she'll be ok, right? Damn it Pari, look at what your writing does to me! Getting me all emotionally involved. Any way update A.S.A.P.

Date: 08-16-04 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
PARI!!!!! You are scaring me! You write too well dearest dauce, you are scary! I want you to go on, i do not care if you do not finish any other thing, alright? You can not leave me like that!!!!

Date: 08-16-04 - 06:11 pm Title: Prologue
I still say liked it is too weak! Put in a LOVED it thing, please. I LOVE it, it is scary and fast and thrilling and breathless . You write so very well and you have so much passion inside you it leaks out in every thing you write and do. I am not even menacing you, because you will never finish it, but post in X_Friends., please? The link at least. grrrr

Date: 08-16-04 - 06:11 am Title: Prologue
Pari! You killed Hank! You, you... And you started even another story! Ok, I know I shouldn't say anything cause I didn't end any of mine, but... another? Good job, I like it (but I'm a sucker for cop's stories, so...), even if you killed Hank. Poor Hank. *sniff*