

Date: 02-17-14 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh you are so wrong to leave it hanging right there. I hope you pick this one up again. I love Logan's character.
Date: 01-18-11 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Finish please

Date: 08-26-07 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter 7
You are NOT going to leave this unfinished are ya?
I hope you haven't abandoned this story just as it's picking up pace. Please tell me ya haven't.

Date: 03-26-07 - 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
You always leave us champing at the bit, slavering hungrily for an update, knock us over the head with a chapter well-written, insightful, and full of thoughts we never thought we would have about these characters, since you always manage to keep them fresh.
Now, I know you will make us wait weeks, even MONTHS, for another update, you cruel, cruel woman, you! There you go again!!! I like how you brought in Raven, and the tense little scene with Jean and Logan. It hit the spot.

Date: 03-26-07 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Date: 12-30-06 - 10:34 pm Title: Prologue
Great story so far.

Date: 10-01-06 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter 6
damn, i thought u abandoned this story long ago....
it's nice suprise to see it updated. gives me hope to see others fine stories that seems to be forgotten.

Date: 09-30-06 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
TY pari :D
great update, gd you got logans anger in there ^^

Date: 06-28-06 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 5
ahhh...i was devistated when i realized this story wasn't complete. i hope hope hope that you will continue it and finish it. i love it and the characterization is right on.

Date: 05-13-06 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is a good start. I am interested to see more...how Logan and Ororo work together without mutant powers. Will there be an update soon???

Date: 07-25-05 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying your police spine on all of this. and i have a feeling that it wll only get better...I have an idea who the killer is but will keep that to myself incase i am wrong.

Date: 07-22-05 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Pari, girl, finally some updates!!! I was beginning to wonder what happened to you! LOL, Logan is such a cynical bitch. Keeping America "pure".... psh, gee, I wonder where he came from? You have to forgive my attitude.... I just hate these arguments. I like the way the story is unfolding, kinda reminds me of Law and Order. Keep it up girl... I can't wait for more!

Date: 07-22-05 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 5
was short, but thanks. You'v ebeen awefully quite in terms of stories.

Date: 07-22-05 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh snap! An update! :D I don't think it was boring at all. Being that I love shows like Law and Order and CSI, I'm just eating this whole fic up. I could just imagine the horrific scenes you desribed in this chapter. And you just have to love 'Ro for putting Logan in his place about "pure Americans".