

Date: 06-28-05 - 10:41 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
Thank YOU! *standing ovation* wonderful, wonderful story. I have had the most thrilling time reading this, and you made it feel like i was a part of this gripping story too. Great closure for the end, especially how they have further newfound appreciation for each other. oh n btw about the last chapter i liked very much the fact that you gave xavier a complexity of character and moral dilemma even though he was a sideline character. added depth. more whole. nice. :) again, thank you! I shall now eagerly await the first chapter of your next epic. Thank you. (:

Date: 06-28-05 - 09:46 pm Title: Unexpected complications
What did he do to her??? The bastard... the horny bastard! Oh man.... this is crazy!!! Wolvie finally knows the truth and he doesn't come back and claim his girl!! What is he smoking?? Besides the stogie, that is. ::sighs heavily:: And Ro! Dancing for him while he jacked off like that!! That's creepy... especially since she didn't plan on going further than that. And the Prof.... what does he have to do with all of this? I have to keep reading!!!! Fabulous job, by the way!!!
Author's Response: Yes. Keep reading, windrider, more to be revealed!! I'm pretty sure he's just smoking a stogie, but ya never know. Ro's behavior should strike you as odd, it was meant to be out of sinc with her normal attitude. Observant reader picknig up on that :D
More on the way!!

Date: 06-28-05 - 09:28 pm Title: Smackdown
Can I watch too?!?!? ::jumps ups and down:: LOL!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! You are the WOMAN!!!! Now, where's Wolvie? Oh man!! Ro beat that sniveling bitch up nicely!!! She's such a good person because in that state of mind, I would not be so forgiving and compassionate. Amazing amazing amazing!!!

Date: 06-28-05 - 09:10 pm Title: Breakfast
::cough cough::"Maybe I will"? Maybe she won't. Maybe Logan will pull his head out of his ass and realize she wouldn't attack a pregnant woman. Maybe Logan will stumble upon the truth. (Is that too much to ask for?!?!?) ::jumps up and down with hands clasped:: Maybe Jean will fall of the face of the planet!!! Maybe Logan will find out the baby isn't his!!! ::squeals:: LOL! Okay, okay.... I know I am the overzealous reader but a girl can dream, right? I love it!!!!
Author's Response: Overzealous? No, you're perfect! I love how involved you are!! ::Grins widely:: This review had me grinning, then giggling on the way to the grocery store. ;)

Date: 06-28-05 - 08:31 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
Great personality in this one! I could swear I actually know these people. The race was so good I almost started to grab for an oh-shit bar. ;) It's all so perfect.....hmm, too perfect?
Author's Response: Too perfect... well, you know I need to give them a bit of reprieve before I slam some more baddies there way :) But there are more coming, and some pretty big developments as well. Motivations revealed and a look at the pasts of several characters. Stay with me girl, we got a long ride ahead...and keep the oh-shit bar handy!!

Date: 06-28-05 - 07:45 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
Okay, I actually read this chapter about four hours ago, but I didn't leave feedback because I had a train to catch. That should show you how addicted I am to this story. I almost missed my train just so that I could read the chapter. I did make the train, but if I hadn't it would have still been woth it, because that' s how good this chapter is. After the hot and heavy love scene, which was very well-written, we finally get to see them all go out and have fun without something ruining it....yet. lol. But I loved that race scene, I wish I could drive a care like 'Ro. And I had forgotten that Wolvie didn't know anything about the "smackdown" that Storm gave Jean...leave it to my girl Dazzler to remind everybody :::grins::: I really love how close Ali and 'Ro are becoming, most author's give Storm and Jean that "sisterly" bond and its nice to see something different. I especially like that we actually get to see Dazzler and Remy's interaction with one another. I really like this couple, and even though its RoLo I would love to see more Dazz/Gam, just so we know how they REALLY feel about each other. X-men Black team is so cute...they are all dating each other...as long as it doesn't turn into Dawson's Creek, where everyone is playing musical-mates. lol. But I have faith in where ever you are taking us on this wild ride. Great job. Now I just have to sit at my computer screen and constantly check for updates...and that is no joke, I check this site about 5-times a day, just in case. ;-D
Author's Response: ::Smiling like an idiot::
More on Ali and Gambit, because I like them together. I hated dawson's Creek so, no worries there JamesGirl!! Not to say there won't be conflict and drama, because we both know I loooove conflict and drama (and hot steamy sex scenes) so... expect plenty of all in this story. I'll try to update again today!! :)

Date: 06-28-05 - 04:59 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
Must have more, must have more...I'm beginning to shiver and feel cold, I'm suffering withdrawls, hurry with the next update! LOL!

Date: 06-28-05 - 03:17 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
Delicious! Sinfully cute and boy do i wish i was them.

Date: 06-28-05 - 02:09 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
Ahhhh! It's nice to have a great humping....ooops! I mean It's nice that Storm & Wolvie can have a nice get together. LOL. Anyway love the chapter, but I know the next one we are going to have some great violence. I wonder who we are going to see and meet in the next chapter? :D
Author's Response: Hahaha.
There will be some surprises in Vegas for all those there. And some new characters introduced...Sabertooth for example. :O Keep reading and reviewing, minah, you know how much it helps!!

Date: 06-28-05 - 01:59 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
ok it was a good chapter just like all the other but what about the violence i miss it.. but this was a fun chapter keep them coming
Author's Response: To quote my Gambit: "Bloodthirsty little thing ain't ya?" :D

Date: 06-28-05 - 01:40 pm Title: Viva Las Vegas
YEAH, BABY YEAH! Whatever is going on in Vegas between Logan & Ororo should definitely come home to Winchester! I love this chapter because after all the tension build up, it's good just to have plain ole fun! I would personally like to see a few more sex scenes before the drama starts up again! You know Wraith is still lurking out there somewhere waiting to wreck havoc on Ororo
& Logan's lives! LOL! Can't wait windrider1!
Author's Response: Don't worry, elanda. Their emotional (and physical) bond is only going to get stronger. :)
Yes, Wraith is still lurking out there, as is the remaining Hellfire club and FoH and Magneto...and wow, I still have a lot of story to tell. Stay tuned... ;)

Date: 06-28-05 - 02:29 am Title: Healing
This story was the most romantic sweet touching and heart warming. Wolveine resuce(sp) his woman and Storm get her man. That how a story suppose be written. Thank you!!!!
Author's Response: You are very welcome, cinquetta and welcome to the realm!! I'm a die-hard romantic, believing love can survive anything and in my stories it always will. :) Keep reading!!

Date: 06-28-05 - 02:24 am Title: Smackdown
Bitchin' girl I like it. Storm know how to kick ass.

Date: 06-28-05 - 12:19 am Title: Healing
I love this story. The characters and their actions are so real and uncontrived. I love the imagery and the language. I actually feel like I'm watching a Mutant reality show. LOL Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, kelley. I'm really having a good time writing this story. A Mutant Reality show...hmmm...that sounds like it could be fun...(thanks for the idea) :D I'll be updating soon, and there will be a couple Vegas chapters that should be fun to read (I hope)! Thanks again!!

Date: 06-27-05 - 11:30 pm Title: Healing
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!! The love scene was just perfect!!!! So, tender, so emotional, so raw. I'm so happy they finally got together! I like how you made Kitty say "Wowsaw". I know what movie you got that from, I use that expression everyday. LOL. Can't wait to see what fun they will all have in Vegas. Just make sure Storm don't get pregnant any time soon, LOL. Update A.S.A.P.
Author's Response: Yaaaaay! Thanks for my 200th review (Holy crap!) And keep 'em coming. What movie is that from? Because i can't remember, i know I heard it before, but ...? (Help) There will be more love scenes to come, they've been emotionally wrung out and need each other. No, she won't get pregnant anytime soon. They need to just be Logan and Ro for awhile. Plus there's a lot more crap left to hit the fan, soooo... I'll update today, and I expect one from you soon as well. :D