Now thats the type of edge im talking about lap dance and all...i'm off to go take a very cold shower. Oh, yeah and i hope Storm's okay.

Author's Response: ::Laughing:: Enjoy the shower...

WONDERFUL!!!! hahahahaha I noticed your grinning author's note and thought "ooohh we're in for quite a ride with this chapter" and I was sooo right. At first, I actually felt bad for Jean. I mean, I hate her and all, but no one deserves to lose a child. And then you worked your magic and threw a curveball. YES! omg, I can't get over how kickass Storm was! And Ali? man, that girl is hilarious...I can't wait until Jean tells Wolverine...should be an interesting chapter, eh?

Author's Response: Ali is fast becoming a favorite of mine. She's just waht Ro needs. Jean's not stupid, she won't tell Logan in person, but she will tell him, and there will be consequences. :) Thanks for the review, Charmer!! Off to write more.

::grumble:: wish *I* could wake up with Wolverine half-naked in my bed...

SmackDown! Smackdown! You rock girl! I can't wait till wolverine finds out. That means it going to be a real showdown with Shinobi & Wolvie. Love it!

Author's Response: Shinobi and Wolvie will be confronting each other very soon, minah...stay tuned!! And thanks for the motivation :D

All I say for this one is, Hmmmmm the plot thickens, now hopefully when I read the next chapter Jean will have a blackeye! :D By the way you starting to make me like Shinobi. LOL

omg girlfriend you're da bomb it took me a minute to get into bb 'cause i was coming off of beast w/in and wind..change smackdown was the best ch so far the hormone thing was a nice twist i knew she wasn't preg but wondered how logan didn't pick up on it. and xavier is a trip this is the best dark xavier asided from onslaught that i've read 1 request could you make shinobi less likeable he's slowly working his magic on me and i know i don't like him and please please please let all hell break loose when jean tells logan she was lying i want him to hurt really really really hurt-he made my favorite windrider cry i'm probably alone here but would you delve a little deeper into why jean always needs to be the favorite her outburst was self explainatory but i'm one of those people who likes a good backstory i know scott lo0ves her but i'd like to know what's his reason for staying with her after this stunt ok so that wasn't one request fyi love you're writing style you're very talented-i can clearly imagine the scenes as they unfold-almost as if i'm a fly on the wall oh and thanks for updating daily-you have no idea how frustrating it is to read a good story get involved and never see it updated or *gasps* completed so thank you thank you thank you

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!! Shinobi less likeable? Mmmmaybeee. Xavier is pretty dark, and I like him like that. :D there will be hints of backstory for all the primary characters and a few of the secondary, jean and Scott will both be in those, as will Kitty, Kurt Ali and Gambit. I will try to update again today...hope you like where this goes and once again: Thank you for taking the time to review!!

Unbe-frikkin-leivable! She deserved every last bit of that ass whoopin'. The girl has some serious problems. When Wolverine comes back there are going to be some consequences and repercussions. But please don't let him off that easily. He has to suffer for not choosing the right side, and for being a complete jerk.

Author's Response: He'll have to play catch up with Shinobi when he comes home that's for sure. :D And Jean will be on his $**t list for a loooong time. more on the way!!