Okay taht was just my first inpresion: now to take things apart. Shinobi is getting too good. You want us to like him don't you? You're even worse than the Profesor! I still don't like him, it's an act and i can see it. He wants storm like a hunter wants a big reindeer head above his fireplace. It smells bad. Wolverne LOVES Sorm, but he threaens her with his claws and does NOTHING to Jean, and doesn't even let teh profesor have a talk to with her?!??!?!? What is he thinking?!?! While threatenng Stormy is perfectly clear, defending jean is NOT!!! And i still think Jean is lying. Either she's not pregnant or it's someone else's baby. Not Scott's. Maybe Warren's? Or some ther boy from the school. Maybe even Shinobi's. That would make a good twist. The Profesor is back in my graces today :D Oh, and where are Scott and Beast off to? Something smells fishy there aswll. "An' the nose don't lie, bub" I ABSOLUTELY love this story. And i';m so happy you update everyday, but i still can't help wanting more!!!

Author's Response: You're a clever one, BP... Wolverine was protecting his kid, which as we know, he gets a little carried away with...(he's an idiot sometimes) I'm so glad you love the story, you are one of the muses that keep me going. More on the way!! :)

TERRIFIC CHAPTER! Where do I begin? First off let me say that I realize Jean is pregnant or something, but can you let Storm Pound on her just a little? Please? She is such a bitch! I can’t believe she said that to Kurt. I’m frikkin outraged ova hea! You’re writing is so clear that I can see everything happening in my head. I love your interactions between Ali and Gambit. Like when he cuts his eyes at her for saying something. That’s so great. You have me completely invested in each and every one of these characters, and I am one of those Storm fans who shrinks away from anything having to do with other characters like I’m allergic. Xavier is just so dark. He’s damn scary in this fic.Wolverine pulling his claws on Ororo was kind of understandable. After all she was threatening his “family”. That incident should push Ororo closer to Shaw. :) I like Shinobi a lot. He is Deliciously Evil. That’s what I’ll call him. And hey, what’s this about Scott and Beast being off somewhere?

Author's Response: Scott and Beast will be returnng soon, and new developements will occur on their arrival. Also, yes Shinobi is deliciously evil, and quite persistent in his pursuit of Storm. I don't think he's gonna go anywhere anytime soon... and that may be just the spark to light a fire under Wolverine's a$$. I'm glad you like the characters, I'm also one of those people that are usually "Not Storm, dn't care.", but writing them has been really fun (Espescially Ali and Remy.) :) Thanks for the review!!! :D

Oooooooooh! That little Bitch! Jean got it coming for sure (Which would me in the next chapter. Hint, Hint). I know wolverine was thinking about the baby, It's makes sense that he would be protective, but damit! Now was storm telling Gambit don't let the professor in her head or maybe you are going to throw in the Shadow King :) Love it! On to some more drama.

Author's Response: Hint well taken, minah! :) Plenty more drama on the way!! I love that ya review!! You keep me wanting to write more, so thanks!!

i love this their's no words to say more.

ooh, maybe they don't know it, but xavier's the one she's trying to keep away from her!

Author's Response: Good twist idea, nickel, but no. Xavier is not the one Storm's afraid of, but I like how your devious little mind works!! :D

Why doesn't anyone trust Shinobi?! [insert dramatic Tempest-like sigh with a hint of sarcasm here] :D And Jean, good god a'mighty. She just makes my stomach drop with dread, but I love the conflict. Where's the fun if there's no conflict. Though, it can be said I wouldn't be mad if she was accidentally pushed off a cliff or something. :D

Author's Response: Conflict is fun!! :) I can't help but make Shinobi slightly charming, I do enjoy him...but trustworthy? that's a whole different issue. As always I am so flattered that you read and like the story!! Thanks so much for the review, and your updates! Loved them!! :D

Your story is great, can't wait for the next installment.