Jean is such a BITCH!!!!!! She just had to tread on ground that she has no real idea about!!! Mind you Storm is one of the most powerful mutants on the face of the planet!!! If she really wanted or even if she didn't she could destroy the whole Earth!!! But no, stupid Jean had to be a stupid bitch!!! This was a great chapter!!! I can't wait to see how Xavier explains Storm's relentless power!!!!! So please update A.S.A.P.

Author's Response: Update coming, Tough Spirit!! Yes, Jean is a bitch, and yes Storm is one of the most powerful mutants on the planet!! Jean's not free and clear anytime soon... :) Thanks for the review!!!

My Goodness i felt so out of the loop, i had some serious catching up to do with the chapters but it was well worth it! First, i don't think Jean is pregnant she just running some type of game and if i was Storm i'd push her down a flight of stairs or send some electrical currents through her ass to let her know that the games shut down. Second, i don't know...i have to give it up for Shinobi, i know the dude is supposedly bad and creepy but atleast he's honest with his whole intensions. Whats more romantic than a guy straight out telling you i want you and i ain't gonna stop 'til i have you? Gotta love the whole stalker-esque quality to the guy. Oh, and Wolvie grabbing Storm's hair and putting his claws to her (throat? i forget.) i don't care how in love Storm think she is, there would have been no warning just a straight up lightening bolt cracking his skull open. But i see its about to get really dramatic...is that foreshadowing of the Shadow King i smell?::Sniffs::: Yep, i think it is! As always great chapter, love the story. I've added your stories to my favorites list and everytime one is updated the email for some reason gets sent straight to my junk inbox. Let me just say i've never been so excited to wade through the junk mail because i know somewhere in there is one of your hidden treasures just being awaited to be read!

Author's Response: Hey, I was wondering where you were ::Grins:: Shinobi is a bad and creepy, but your right, there's something about him... :) Shadow King....Mmmmaybeee... I hope to have more updated soon, but my internet keeps flitting out on me, so bear with me :)

okay, catching up to the rest of the world now........ Very much back to my original thought of putting Jean on a leash. With a shock collar. And some inward spikes. Great chapter all the way. As for the last part........umm, wow! Didn't see that coming! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!! I hope to update soon, so stay tuned!!

damn you sure can write a good story

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Keep reading, there's much more to come!!

My momma always said to be mindful of wolves in sheeps clothing... or in this case a little school girl's uniform. LOL, great chapter... why is Jean going with them, she has no place amongst them. Wolvie I can understand, though. I can feel the tension building up!!!

Author's Response: Jean can't let Logan out of her sight. Tension is mounting... ::smiles:: :)

LMAO!!!! Go Ro!!!! I love it!!! School girl with pigtails?!? LOL, I love it!!!! Serves Jean right.... she's a bitch from hell and Scott is a prissy, pompous asshole with no balls. ::takes deep breath:: I think it's cute that Ali and Remy have hooked up or are close to being officially hooked up! :-D I'm so excited!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're excited! So am I!! I am having soooo much fun with this one, and I have so many places i want to go with it. Definitely a long one...hope you're along for the ride!! :) Thanks for reviewing!! You know how much it inspires!!!!

hey again! i realise why your stories are so good to read, it's cos every moment is so laced with suspense or emotion or activity that every part of your story is a story on its own, and altogether your fiction is the most i've ever enjoyed. that said, time to complain! Where's the NEXT CHAPTER! :) neway hope your daughter had a good birthday ^^

Author's Response: ::Blushing:: Thank you soooo much!!! Yes, she had a great birthday,. the next chapter will be up soon, promise! :) As always, nickel, I appreciate the feedback and love to know you like the story!! :D

Excellent insight on what makes Ororo dislike touching! Wolverine and Gambit's protectiveness of her is soooooooooooooo awesome! Ororo's head hurting wouldn't have anything to do with a certain wheelchair bound bald man? Just when I started to think Jean may not be so bad after all, you trip me up with this "so called pregnancy"! Yeah right! Wolverine can't be that thickheaded! He needs to open up those nasal passages and smell the bullshit! Just don't keep him and Ororo away from each other to much longer 'cause we both know they belong together! Oh by the way, I'm thinking about posting this weekend, so keep an eye out and yeah I don't particularly like Halle Berry as Storm, especially in X-Men 1 but she was OK in X-Men 2! Dialect/Accent coaching would probably help along with a few acting classes! I'm not hating on her but................she does need a little help! Keep it coming windrider1!

Author's Response: Yes, he's very protective, and yep they DO belong together. So you caught her head aching, huh? Hmmm.....what could it be? :) You should know I hate to keep them apart for very long, elanda, I like them together waaaay too much, but after screwing Jean and being an ass, Logan needs to suffer a bit... ;) More to come, and I look forward to your post!! YAAYYY!!!! :D