[Report This]Date: 06-23-05 - 01:01 am Title: Field Trip
That...you know what...I am raging right now, RAGING. Oh I want somebody to whoop her tail, anybody, oh how bout everybody, everybody in the mansion whoops Jean's tail including Scott. Hey do me a favor and hook Scott up with Emma! I like him better with Emma anyway. :::takes deep breath::: Okay. I'm calm. I really like the character development here. I love Gambit as the dedicated brother, I like him with Dazzler, and I love that we see that Logan really cares for 'Ro other than just getting in her pants. Now that you let us in on 'Ro's big secret I can't wait for the day when she stops sleeping with a blade under her pillow too. And in closing...I LOVE THIS STORY!!! (I think I will make this my defacto closing to every review I give this story) :::grins:::
Author's Response: Gambit is nothing if not dedicated to Storm, and she to him. Logan already loves her, but he's too stupid to realize it without an assload of drugs and a blade teasing the answers outta him....More to come, Lots more. Hope I don't dissappoint. and...I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS!!! (seriously) :::grins back::::
[Report This]Date: 06-23-05 - 12:11 am Title: Field Trip
I see I was wrong in my assumption that maybe Jean was misunderstood. What a bitch! I fear for Storm's sanity, getting involved with a man with baby mama drama.
Author's Response: Maybe not wrong....we'll see. Don't fear for Storm, she's waaaaay too smart to get mixed up in mama drama.... :)
[Report This]Date: 06-23-05 - 12:09 am Title: Field Trip
damn i was hoping she wasnt pregnant but its an interresting turn so plz post more soon
Author's Response: There will be twists and turns aplenty...stay tuned!!!! More on the way sinisterkamui, more on the way! :D
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 11:40 pm Title: Field Trip
So when do I get to kill Jean? LOL! Ah, windrider1, I bow to you. You have kept me from suffering Bloodbonds withdrawls. I am happy. I really liked this chapter. And the end with Jean and Hank really doesn't sit well with me...it really doesn't. Something doesn't feel right. Kind of like there is something that is going to happen that is related to her pregnancy. I am hoping Wolverine isn't the father...maybe it is the Professor!! LOL! I'm kidding. Congrats on another great chapter.
Author's Response: Hahaha, you really want Jean's head on a platter! Love it! It shouldn't sit well with you...(hint, hint) I'm not sure the Profesor has any lower body function....? Ok, I just ewwwed myself. thanks. ::wink:: Keep reading and I promise Jean'll get hers. :)
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 11:34 pm Title: Field Trip
Ooooooo Jean!! That little witch drives me crazy!! What's she thinkin' in that twisted little mind of hers?? Ugh. Ho. Not you. Her. You rock.
Author's Response: She's a bit twisted, yep. She's thinking...ok, maybe she;s not thinking,. Ho.yes. Me rock? Thanks. ::grinning:: As always, Charmer, I love ya reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 08:32 pm Title: Into the morning
Okay, now that I have the time...Thank you once again! That was a great start to my day. I love your sense of humor! Damn Shinobi for being charming! It would have been so much easier to hate him completely. huh, wonder if 'Ro's thinking the same thing? For a minute there I didn't think that Logan was going to go. And Jean too? This little excursion is bound to be unforgetable. Yay! :)
Author's Response: There will be drama, action, dark edges and lots of humor int this story. I still have a lot to write, and I mean LOT, so I hope I don't bore you....let me know if I do. Yes, this trip will be memorable.
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 09:54 am Title: Into the morning
LOL! Love the "Special Student" comment and I should have known that you would actually have Shinobi show up in that get up. :D So where are the kiddies going on the field trip? Great Job.
Author's Response: Well, Wolvie is rather special...
The date turned field trip will go to Shaw's private menagerie and conservatory. He's a collector of all things exotic...hint, hint... I'll update soon, minah, and as always your feedback is MUCH appreciated!! :D
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 09:18 am Title: Into the morning
(uh cut off again) anyway that sentence had me laughing out loud and HAHAHAHAH 'SPECIAL' STUDENTS.. AHHAHAHA ^^ *weep*. heh you can tell i had a wonderful time reading this chapter. but 4 pages only!? (i know cos i print your chapters to get a better read :p) What are you, a normal writer?! GET TO IT!! :)
WICKED AWESOME, GIRL!
Author's Response: Hahaha!! Blame serial_charmer for the shortness, I had to type, re-read and post in like twenty minutes!! :D
You print my chapters ::blushes:: Wow, that actually makes me very happy!! I'll make it up to you on the next, nickel. :P
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 09:17 am Title: Into the morning
HAHAha wonderful chapter!! so entertaining!! fiesty Ro! yeah!! oh and "Alison liked Wolverine, she really did. He reminded her of a stray dog she had once. "
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 06:56 am Title: Into the morning
I only have 5 minutes so my major comment for this chapter has to be "LMAO!!!!!!!!!"
Author's Response: ::Grins cheekily:: Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 12:46 am Title: Into the morning
Wolvie reminds Ali of her dog, that was priceless. This story is full of so many classic moments. I love it. And you are a master of the dialogue. It is so snappy and real, it draws me in every time. I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!! That's all I have been saying to you lately, but there's definately nothing wrong with that. LOL.
Author's Response: Nothing wrong with saying it, JamesGirl, cause I never get tired of hearing it!! I really enjoy dialogue, I find it alone can move things along faster and with more punctiuation than me trying to describe all the emotions all the time!! :) More on the way!!
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 12:41 am Title: Into the morning
I didn't know he was actually going to do it! LOL thats so great! Now whats going to happen next? Kids downstairs enjoying Shaw's Neverland, while he and Ro get freaky upstairs? Not really counting on it but it would be nice. :) good chap as always.
Author's Response: Shinobi is nothing if not determined, and VERY comfortable with himself. Next up, the date turned field trip and some bonding and jealousy... :)
[Report This]Date: 06-22-05 - 12:32 am Title: Into the morning
very good story other then the mental image of shaw in a school girl outfit that is anyway keep um coming
Author's Response: Sorry about the visual....He's good looking if that helps :>
More on the way!! Thanks for the review!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 06-21-05 - 11:19 pm Title: Into the morning
Finally...hehehe jk. loved it!! This was an absolute riot, through and through. My favorite line is probably "speaking of Yummy..." haha, I love Ali and Remy together and I adore the nickname Yummy hehe. Wonderful job, yet again!
Author's Response: Patience, Charmer, sheesh. I slammed this one out in like twenty minutes just to please you. :) But that's ok, because you are one of my muses and keeping you happy keeps me inspired :)
Thanks for reviewing!! I'll TRY to have another chapter up tonight, but it's my daughter's birthday, so,,, :P
[Report This]Date: 06-21-05 - 10:52 pm Title: Harry's
ooo that Charles is EVIL! i bet you didn't know that! ^^ haha i love how everyone took the 'pregnancy'.
Author's Response: Thanks, nickel. I've heard the professor wasn't so nice...Hahaha!! Enjoy the rest!! And keep those reviews coming!! :)
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