[Report This]Date: 06-20-05 - 11:37 pm Title: Danger Room Session
MYSTERY!? Talk about mystery, you have a hell of a knack for cliff hangers! Keep up the good work, doll.
Author's Response: ::Wink:: Thanks!! And i will :D
[Report This]Date: 06-20-05 - 08:37 pm Title: Danger Room Session
Shinobi? Logan...kill him. I had a feeling this was going to be the return of the sicko. I'm excited to see what trouble he brings with him. Very hot RoLo in this chapter. I would like to request more of that please. LOL.
Author's Response: I always love your reviews!!! Sicko? Wow, you really don't like him. Good. He's hateable (Is that even a word?) And trouble? Shinobi's packing trouble by the busloads!!
Yes, I will have plenty more 'really hot Ro/Lo' in this story. As well as a few more surprises. :D As I aways I love ya for reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: 06-20-05 - 08:09 pm Title: Danger Room Session
Que que que?!? What he doing here?!? What's up with all this hanky-panky in the danger room.... its forever stained it seems. Take it to the bedroom ladies and gentlemen please!! I have to tell you it hurts to think that the professor is a bad guy... makes me want to cry. But, I am your faithful follower, uh I mean reader, and as such I shall commit to your stories. I think its adorable that everyone's a couple on the Black team though! :-P Keep writing!
Author's Response: The need hits ya where it hits ya, fellow windrider. No time for a bedroom...(LOL)
The Professor isn't an all out baddy, and he may yet be redeemable, we'll see.
I had not noticed that the Black team was made entirely of couples, well in the back of my mind maybe, but now that it's been pointed out ...hmmm?
Don't worry, I have a writing bug now, I don't think I'll be stopping anytime soon...unless of course you stop reading, then i shall wither into a dried up ball and blow away on the next strong breeze...Don't let that happen to me! :D
[Report This]Date: 06-20-05 - 05:34 pm Title: Danger Room Session
Mystery? The end of this chapter is so reminiscent of the 1st chapter of "The Beast Within"! I can't wait to find out who this person is! Your killing me slowly windrider! Is another chapter update coming today because all I need is one more chapter for the shaking to stop!LOL! Oh, by the way, the scene between Logan/Ororo was sizzlin'! I'm waiting for them to seriously get it on for the 1st time nd 2nd,3rd,4th..............................
Author's Response: You know who it is.... And yes, i hope to take some time and write another update in a little while. (Hope the shaking stops ;>)
I like a steamy Ro/LO so I figured why not write my own:)
Speaking of which *ahem* when are you posting elanda?
[Report This]Date: 06-20-05 - 05:28 pm Title: Danger Room Session
Ok! Hit the drama music button. I am quessing that Mr. Shaw has just paid a visit to the mansion. And I am guessing Charles has something devious up his sleeve? Give me more! :D
Author's Response: You would be correct!! :D More on the way!!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 07:12 pm Title: Revelations
*Grr* Woman, would you get yourself a job at Marvel already!? Here's the Career link http://www.marvel.com/company/careers.htm
Now, switch schools and go get yourself an internship. :P ;)
Author's Response: Hahaha. As much as I'd love to work for Marvel, I'm no where near good enough...besides i like writing for a select few... :) But thank you for thinking I am!!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 11:00 am Title: Revelations
We want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know you the Girl! Another great chapter. :D
Author's Response: Awww shucks... More on the way, minah!! More on the way! :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 10:49 am Title: Revelations
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Where's Shinobi? I know he's not Goin to let her slide!)
Author's Response: No Shinobi is most definitely not going to let Ro slide. He'll be re-entering the story in the next chapter or two... More on the way Mary and thanks for reviewing!! I love how involved you are!! ::grins::
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 10:05 am Title: Revelations
and oh i forgot i wanted to say i really liked what you did with storm's history. that was good. and that whole scene was excellent :D
Author's Response: Again, thank you. i like tweaking with the characters a bit, and I'm glad you like it!!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 10:03 am Title: Revelations
that was a vERY good read. totally action packed and extremely captivating. NEXT!!! :)
Author's Response: thank you! Next is in the works, nickel!! :) Keep an eye out...
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 08:48 am Title: Revelations
Well i'm back early! :D Just in time for this fantastic update! Really cool chapter! On ething though: Storm's parents were killed when she was 6 moths old by a bomb who crashed the building. And i think you need a beta reader to creect some of the spelling mistakes. Anyhow awsome stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I know how Storm's parents were killed in the comics, but this is fanfic ::wink:: and so far I haven't stayed 100% true to cannon anyway, so... Since I usually write in my sapre time it's done rather hastily, but I'll start proofing for ya! :) C-ya and thanks again for the review.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 02:12 am Title: Revelations
Action packed chapter windrider1 and revelations indeed! Storm is such a multi-faceted character in this story! You write her so well it's kind of creepy but in a GOOD WAY! You've taken Wolverine to heights i've yet to see in other Ro/Lo! Feral, sexy and oh so DIRTY but in a GOOD WAY! Cyclops still has a stick in his ASS and SPINE! As for Jean,I'll qoute my boyfriend: "Ho's get paid,sluts get laid!" My only question is: What is up with "WHEELS"? I read your response in a review and you said "Charles is not the benevolent leader we all know." Are you making him toe the line between good/evil or is he an out and out bady guy yet to be discovered? I will stay tuned!
Author's Response: Xavier is definitely smudging the line betweeen good and evil, but as of yet he's not an out and out baddy. Just a very ambitious man, slightly blinded by his ideals, willing to do whatever it takes to reach his goal. (I repeat: Whatever it takes)
Don't expect the stick to be pulled out anytime soon, there's a lot of resentment towards Storm's seemingly preferential treatment, as well as lingering jealousy between the four of them, so watch for sparks ::wink:: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 01:25 am Title: Revelations
Wow. I love the twist you gave to the death of Ororo's parents. Very orginal. I don't believe anyone has ever done that before...not that I know of anyway. I can't wait to read Logan's reaction to 'Ro's confession. I know you'll make it good. ::wink::
Author's Response: I don't think it's been done before either, and there is more of 'Ro's past yet to be revealed. I hope you like the other twists I add to the story as well. :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 01:06 am Title: Revelations
Wow, I just realized I'd never reviewed this story!! Well, just to let you know that I HAVE been reading it and I HAVE been enjoying it. This Storm is just fascinating. I absolutely love that you can write her so well two completely different ways. Congrats on another excellent story :D
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I was wondering where you were ::tease::
I think there are many facets of Storm and she gives me plenty to work with.
I expect more reviews from you charmer! ;)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 12:50 am Title: Revelations
That chapter was really great. It took a while but I'm glad Ororo snapped Logan out of it. Some real deep stuff. I can't believe that Ororo opened up that part of her life with him. but it was needed. Update A.S.A.P.
Author's Response: Your absolutely right, it was needed to start that bond between them. I'll update soon, promise! :)
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