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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-07 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: John Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-25-06 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 11

Well Duckie is a child of Logan and Ororo and like her father she will be the best at what she does. Nathan will be the same i think when he grows up, but will the kid be ok or not that's the million dollar question?

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Date: 04-25-06 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 10

Who would have guessed Wolverine the bad ass a big teddybear, but what adult has'nt turned into a babblying fool when it comes to little babys and kids.

Reviewer: John Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-25-06 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

That had to be the funnyest chapter i've read in a while, but do'nt mess with a pregnant woman and always remember think before you open your mouth. But very good story.

Reviewer: John Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-25-06 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 8

Well you have to love a woman who knows what she want's and then she goes and get's it. I'd like to see the bill for the damage at the beach house. And now a baby. Great chapter.

Reviewer: John Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 7

Perfect,beautiful,wonderful,exotic,erotic that is just a start and let us not forget romantic. Nuf said great chapter.

Reviewer: John Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

Forge is a fool. But as hard as it was for Ororo she is so much better off pursueing a chance with Logan. Damn good storie.

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Date: 04-24-06 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Remy and Ororo are brother and sister in both there eyes right? But maybe not, atleast for Remy? And the Shadow King i think Logan would like to ripe him a new one. But just get Forge out of this story.

Reviewer: John Mils Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ororo and Logan training and teaching hear his fighting skills,two girls kissing,Forge shooting Ororo, alternet reality and to top it all off Ororo 12 again. Did i forget anything so sounds great to me.

Reviewer: John Mils Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Logan and Ororo kissing that make any chapter a good one. Prof. X is one smooth mutant, he does take care of his family.

Reviewer: john Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 2

I for one whould like cut and gut T 'Challa. The lucky bastard to have something so wonderful given to him so freely we should all be so lucky. And now enter Prof. X now it's going to get real good.

Reviewer: john Mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

I for one whould like cut and gut T 'Challa. The lucky bastard to have something so wonderful given to him so freely we should all be so lucky. And now enter Prof. X now it's going to get real good.

Reviewer: John Mils Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

It is a start on a long road of learning about our white hair beauty. But the pain and sorrow we have learn cuts to ones very soul, to bring out the pain and anger that swelles in the heart. And just one of many events that has molded Ororo Monroe into the powerful STORM.

Reviewer: Nesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-27-06 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ok, I stayed silent for a long while, patiently waiting for an update with no results. I just have two words to say UPDATE PLEASE!
Thanks

Reviewer: obran4of5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-05 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter 11

I love it! Having Logan write his thoughts in the journal give us a different view of his inner self. Tis is great. Please, please continue this. I would love to read Logan' thoughts on his other child/children.

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