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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 07:28 am Title: Faithless decisions

Love it need much much vmore.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 03:26 am Title: Faithless decisions

Love the wording you have for much of this. There are typos which I'll try not to mention again but it's the way you phrase a perspective that I love especially how Jean felt like an intruder in their world.

Reviewer: windrider1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 01:45 am Title: Faithless decisions

I hate that guy! Ewww, I hate that guy. Grr... Yeah, post more so I can get the bitter taste of forge outta my mouth. :)

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 10:47 pm Title: Faithless decisions

great chapter love the inner battle with storms feelings but what does wolverine think post more

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 09:38 pm Title: Faithless decisions

Great story development. You just need to work on your 'tenses', you seem to move from past(did) to present (does) midway through a sentence.....anyway, I am sure you will improve as your progress. Looking for a 'speedy' update.

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