This story is really shaping up well. I remember you showing it to me when it was just an idea. Look what you have done with it now. And you even have my Shinobi-san in it. *swoons* You're spoiling us with all these stories. Now I will annoy you on AIM for an update until you give me a sneak peek of the next chapter or somethin'. P.S. Do my eyes deceive? You haven't posted this at ffnet yet?