You must login () to review.
Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-15-06 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter Two

Loved the scenes at the mansion. From both Logan's and Ro's point of view.
Uh oh, now she's in trouble I guess :)

Reviewer: RFTGod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Two

Uh-oh. She's been caught.Dun. Dun. DUUUNNN. Details still equal excellent. When do we get the next chapter again?

Reviewer: Sparkle (RnbwRvrGrl) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter Two

I know it's early, but I'm about to go on my daytrip. I'm waiting for the others to get ready. Another excellent chapter that's filled with promise. I can already see the small hint of attraction between Ororo and Logan, but what happens now that he knows she's an assassin. God's Hand sounds scary. Maybe it's just me.

Reviewer: ShastyMcNasty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Two

Australian football is the shiznit. Had to say that. You've successfully killed Slipstream in a story. You should be proud of yourself. I know I am. I can onlyl imagine how mad Sebastian will be at Ororo when she tells him she failed. And God Victor is about as dumb as rocks. Come on now. Your computer can't be that bad.

Reviewer: Felina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter Two

I figured out why I keep seeing question marks instead of the quotations. It's the dumbest reason ever. Tell ya about it later. You're a slave to the details aren't you? You've just been too kind in showing every little thing. It's like watching a movie in written word. English teachers must love you. You definitely know how to show, not tell. Bwahaha!

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter Two

wow, you write very well.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 11:43 am Title: Chapter Two

I wake up, roll out of bed, groggily turn on my computer and what do I find? A gift from the Tempest herself!! Fabulous update. I am so loving this story. An assassin 'Ro. Sweet! A trilogy!! Be still my rampaging blood pumper! ::Big ass grin:: I can't wait for more! You never disappoint!!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 07:10 am Title: Chapter Two

what fun! love the details amd tie-in to other characters less thought of like Cameron.

You must login () to review.