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Reviewer: Calliope_Soars Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-06 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Three

This is like the most awesome sci-fi/suspense movie ever, I feel like I should have some popcorn while reading this. It's unbelievably gripping and I can't help but be overwhelmed by your eye for detail and the easy flow to your writing. It feels effortless, yet I can see how meticulous you've been in constructing this story. My highest compliment. What with this story and Odalisque and this story, you are turning me into a full-fledged fangirl. Simply put, you win at life!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-15-06 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Three

I like the effect Logan has on her even though they barely know each other.
Damn, Sebastian really made her pay for her failure. I hope she'll be able to get away from this business as soon as possible.
Mmmm yum, totally loved that kiss! :D

Reviewer: joe mckee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-14-06 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter Three

this is a very interesting story would love ta see what cums next :) keep up the good work ay but then i know sometimes a story just dies
joe

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-06 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Three

update
plz

Reviewer: Stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-07-05 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Three

So when are you goin to update?

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-08-05 - 11:19 am Title: Chapter Three

When are you going to update? I have been dying for more of this story because it is so good! Update soon, please or I'll just die :)

Reviewer: Sparkle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-05 - 09:04 am Title: Chapter Three

This chapter makes me happy. :) I hope you feel better soon, Temp!

Reviewer: RFTGod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-05 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter Three

So, that's why I haven't heard from you. You coulda dropped an email... O.K., I know that isn't realistic in your condition. Just glad to hear that you're doing okay. I can't believe you managed to get all this out and you're sick. That's dedication. Excellent chapter. I like this. It's definitely something different from you. It has this whole creepy, eerie uber-scifi feel going. With the God's Hand and the freaky club (which still reminds me of a crazy La Vela. I'll be awaiting your update. After I email and stuff to see how you're doing.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-05 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter Three

8,000 words aren’t even remotely enough when it comes to this story, Digital! This story is so exceptional, imo that I wanted more! Nevertheless it was a great chapter, very satisfying, very exciting, very, very good. I’m thankful you updated when you weren’t feeling well but I also hope you’re feeling better.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-05 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Three

::Swoons with envy of such talent:: Ahh, Tempest you are indeed a master weaver of intoxicating and enthralling tales. I anxiously await your next update. Please don't make me suffer. Hope you are feeling better soon. :D

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-05 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Three

WOW... you did this while under the weather? Well, i certainly hope you feel better/ get well soon, you know the sentiment. :) You skimped on the action? i couldn't tell. I'm sittin here at work reading withe my face pressed against the screen and my jaw dripped! LMAO!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-05 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter Three

This is simply wonderful. I am constantly amazed by your storytelling, and writing abilities. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ;-)

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-05 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter Three

this may be the most interresting story on here by far good job

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-05 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Three

::Applauds loudly:: You rock.... I mean wow.... I hope that someday I can write as well as you can. ::bows down:: Hope you feel better... when you're healthy and kickin', I know you'll write more chapters and faster... so you see, it is purely selfish motive that I hope you feel better. :-p j/k!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!!

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