[Report This]Date: 09-27-12 - 03:57 am Title: Secret Burdens
Omg, I was just reading this on fanfic! Intense chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. Trying to update on this site and everything. I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 01-06-12 - 04:00 am Title: Secret Burdens
I really like this story that your working on. It isn't just a quick romance or simple writing, your giving us emotion and journey for Storm and Wolverine, your making the real. Thank you for writing these chapters. I don't really have a favorite chapter, b/c I like all of them equally. I come back here adleast twice a week to see is you've updated and i will continue. This is the kind of story I've been waiting on.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I actually really enjoy writing this story, it's just that life sucks a huge hole out of my writing time. I'm really glad you enjoy reading it though, that makes it so much more encouraging. I appreciate the review! Thanks again.
Date: 11-03-11 - 03:28 am Title: Secret Burdens
I enjoy how their relationship is growing into this blossoming friendship where they try and see each other as people. Your writing is really good, and the insights you give Ororo and Logan really show how they are developing.
This is just me making this work into something that is mine, but I honestly want them to have this relationship where they have this platonic respect for each other.
Yeah, your writing is real and I love how it isn't some soapy love fest, but a journey for two characters that are in dire need of a cathartic release.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I actually wasn't going to make them come together in this piece but it's kind of taking on a life of it's own. Originally, I was going to write as you were saying, but regardless, whether this turns into a romance or not they've both got major trust issues and emotional shit that they need to get through first. So yeah, no soapy love fest happening anytime soon. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 10-06-11 - 03:22 am Title: Secret Burdens
This story is great. I love the flow I hope you update more often.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a few more chapters written so far but I'm stuck down the road and I don't want to rush there with updates and then leave you without for months or something. Sorry, but I'm writing as much as I can. I always appreciate the review though!
Date: 09-29-11 - 03:56 am Title: Secret Burdens
hmmm, Did Ororo hold a touch for Scott?...interesting start. And can I say how annoying Logan is over Jean? Just like that stupid movie, lol
Author's Response: Yeah, this had originally been written as a one-shot but then I got other ideas and everything I wanted to explore is still taking a ways to come out. It just keeps going on in my head, but don't worry, all questions will be answered eventually. And yes, Logan and Jean in the movie...still trying to figure out how to disolve that and write it in believably. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09-19-11 - 03:44 am Title: Secret Burdens
Okay, that's what I'm talkin' about! The dialogue was fresh and real, the scene was set up well, I can visualize little details like him messing with his cigar and hanging over her shoulder.
Keep this coming. I frequently yawn when I see movieverse here, wondering what anyone will do with it that I haven't read endlessly before, but I enjoy this.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much. Yeah, I'm trying to do it movieverse but Ororo and Logan's relationship there is completely different than in the comics. So I'm trying to do something different but still believable. Hope it lives up to the expectation. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 09-09-11 - 05:05 pm Title: Secret Burdens
Please continue. That was a great first chapter.
Author's Response: There will definitely be more coming. Working on chapters now actually. Thank you for the review!
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