I really like this story that your working on. It isn't just a quick romance or simple writing, your giving us emotion and journey for Storm and Wolverine, your making the real. Thank you for writing these chapters. I don't really have a favorite chapter, b/c I like all of them equally. I come back here adleast twice a week to see is you've updated and i will continue. This is the kind of story I've been waiting on.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I actually really enjoy writing this story, it's just that life sucks a huge hole out of my writing time. I'm really glad you enjoy reading it though, that makes it so much more encouraging. I appreciate the review! Thanks again.

I enjoy how their relationship is growing into this blossoming friendship where they try and see each other as people. Your writing is really good, and the insights you give Ororo and Logan really show how they are developing.

This is just me making this work into something that is mine, but I honestly want them to have this relationship where they have this platonic respect for each other.

Yeah, your writing is real and I love how it isn't some soapy love fest, but a journey for two characters that are in dire need of a cathartic release.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I actually wasn't going to make them come together in this piece but it's kind of taking on a life of it's own. Originally, I was going to write as you were saying, but regardless, whether this turns into a romance or not they've both got major trust issues and emotional shit that they need to get through first. So yeah, no soapy love fest happening anytime soon. Thanks again!

I love this story and I'm glad you updated this. And I laughed so hard about Logan and how he hates orange juice. The thought of the Mighty Wolverine being brought down by orange juice is so damn hilarious. I really can't wait to see how you are going to bring them together.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know I slacked on this update...sorry! But don't worry, I'm still going. And yeah, I found him hating orange juice as a quirky and yet realistic thing for him, so I went with it. They do have some humor to them. Thanks again for the review.

Ahhhh!!!!! You stop right at the good part again. To say that you left me wanting more is an understatement. :) This is just so good. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Didn't mean to leave it on a cliffhangar , scenes just break up that way. But I'll have another one up soon! I always love your feedback. Thanks.

hmmm, Did Ororo hold a touch for Scott?...interesting start. And can I say how annoying Logan is over Jean? Just like that stupid movie, lol

Author's Response: Yeah, this had originally been written as a one-shot but then I got other ideas and everything I wanted to explore is still taking a ways to come out. It just keeps going on in my head, but don't worry, all questions will be answered eventually. And yes, Logan and Jean in the movie...still trying to figure out how to disolve that and write it in believably. Thanks for the review!

This is still my favorite post-X3 Ororo/Logan fic. Hands down, one of the best out there that would deal with Logan's "love" for Jean (I still can't reconcile that what he had for her was True Love, okay!!), Strom's reaction to that, the possibility that she might've had something for Scott... Yep. This fic just lays all the secrets and cards and burdens on the table and it is intense, passionate, emotional and full of delicious angst. And I'm so happy with the pacing and direction it's going towards, if the chapters on FFnet are any indication! Eagerly anticipating more, as always~! :)

Author's Response: Aw, lychee, you always make me feel good about my story. And yeah, I just wanted to put this out into another channel and see the reaction. Don't worry, I'm still continuing on fanfiction.net.

Okay, that's what I'm talkin' about! The dialogue was fresh and real, the scene was set up well, I can visualize little details like him messing with his cigar and hanging over her shoulder.

Keep this coming. I frequently yawn when I see movieverse here, wondering what anyone will do with it that I haven't read endlessly before, but I enjoy this.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much. Yeah, I'm trying to do it movieverse but Ororo and Logan's relationship there is completely different than in the comics. So I'm trying to do something different but still believable. Hope it lives up to the expectation. Thanks again!