I'm surprised that Charles or Jean can't sense that Ororo was hurt or that her connection to them was lost. Since she can't remember her mental blocks should be down. Charles is slacking. :)
I really like chapter 3. I could picture Ororo in my head going through the house and touching items to jog her memory. I could see her fingers brush across something and hoping it would cause some type of light bulb to go off. And for Chapter 4 loved Logan kicking that car thief's ass. I know how it feel to have your car broken into and someone going through your stuff. So I just pretend Wolverine got some pay back for me too. Lol!
The anticipation is building now that Logan is getting closer to his home. I can't wait to see Logan's reaction to find Ororo at his home with no memory.
Please keep going! Loving both your stories.

Author's Response: Hi D652, Glad you are still liking this. Good to know that the imagery I try to convey is recieved. Sooo sorry to hear about your empathy with the car scenario. Hopefully Logan helped vindicate you if just a little. : ) Charles did get the message about Ororo, as he tried to tell Logan and I like to think that Ororo is just a strong bad ass that even the professor can't get to without her permission. Thank you for following both works this far.