Date: 06-28-12 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 4
i cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: The next chapter is up with the action picking up at the end!
Jade
Date: 05-24-12 - 09:07 am Title: Chapter 4
good story a bit fast but better that then hella slow. thanks for the read hope to see more =)
Author's Response: haha I don't like slow stories so I am making this fast paced. I added the next chapter, it took me a couple of tries but I finally took it in the right direction. Thank you for the review!! Jade
Date: 05-16-12 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooh this is getting interesting!! The Phoenix is going to be a force to be wrecken with!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Phoenix is a stronger character than Jean so I figured it was fitting. :)
Date: 05-16-12 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 4
You just didn't push through your writers block you drive through it with a bulldozer. Lol! This chapter was great. Jean is such a brat. I'm glad that Xavier saw through her act and that Rogue acted quickly to stop Jean before she left the kitchen. So now it looks a showdown is about to begin. The X-Men vs a very pissed off Phoenix.
Author's Response: I figured I needed to make the chapter good since it has been a while! I am glad you liked it and it was not too confusing. Thank you for the review!
Date: 05-15-12 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope you're okay! Great story and continue writing ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am still in pain but resting as I should have been. I will keep up from now on! Thank you again :)