Reviews For Summer Break
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Reviewer: CoCoa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-14-12 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1

wow what a gripping intro!

Reviewer: ClaireLeon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-13-12 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have a second part so bear with me, I was in the middle of typing it last night but fell asleep on my laptop and erased it! Yeah for medication! So hopefully it is as good as the original. *fingers crossed*
Jade

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-12 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well that's an interesting way to get her attention!

Reviewer: victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-12 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh that was one hott i mean hott teaser!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I added the second chapter, so let me know how you like it. Do you think I should have presented the story differently? Thank you for the review. Jade

Reviewer: Pari Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-13-12 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm not fully getting this yet, I see that it's not complete so I'm sure you'll be adding more to explain this chapter. At this point it's not porn w/o plot, that was rape w/o reason. I hope you provide a reason. I myself have used rape in I think two of my RoLo fics, and in one it was Logan raping Ororo, but there was a 'reason' behind that, in fact there was a reason explained in both fics.

So I will give this fic the benefit of the doubt and wait to see how it plays out, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: This is not supposed to be about Logan raping Ororo. I posted the second chapter and it should clarify the scenes of chapter one and the thinking behind it. I would appreciate it if you would read it and let me know your honest opinion!! I based this off a conversation I had with a friend and her boyfriend, I picked their brains thoroughly. I tried to incorporate as much as i could, and hope that everyone understands where i was going and appreciates it. Thank you so much for the review!!! Jade

Reviewer: rolo fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-13-12 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1

So how is this different from rape? They don't have an established relationship, he corners her in an empty room, ogles her purely for her looks and violates her when she tells him to stop? (No means no, kinky ruler sex or not. Also wouldnt that be painful as fuck?)

Just wondering. I want to be able to enjoy RoLo smut because I don't get to read any often.

Author's Response: Okay I posted chapter 2 and it explains everything, hopefully it does and I didn't totally mess up this story. I would love to see what you think after reading the 2nd chapter. It kind of gives you a background look into their dynamic and into what Logan and Ororo are thinking seperately. If it is still reads the wrong way I will have to revise this story. Or post a chapter showing more of Ororo's thoughts. Thank you for the review so much!! Jade

Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-12 - 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Dammmn! If that's only the first day of break these two might not survive the summer. :)

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