Date: 04-20-13 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 8
What did she dooooo oh my goodness. I rarely enjoy soap opera levels of drama in fic (because if I wanted that I would actually watch a soap opera you know?) but I am enjoying this a lot! Probably because it does not feel as over-the-top.
BUT you asked for questions so I'm going to ask questions! 1) What caused Ororo to leave? 2) Why did she have such a hard time returning? 3) What did Charles die of :( 4) Why is Logan involved in this at all, why isn't he just up and leaving the mansion until the drama blows over?
Inquiring minds wish to know!
Author's Response: GOTCHA! I SHALL RESPOND TO THEM AS BEST AS I CAN! Thanks, by the way. I appreciate someone giving me a better direction lmao. And please tell me when this starts to feel too, too much (y'know what I mean?)
[Report This]Date: 04-16-13 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 7
So many questions left to answer! Such a darker version of Ororo...I ove it!
Author's Response: Who doesn't love the occasional dark character spin? And I'm just curious... what questions do you have? (It'll genuinely help figure out what things should be addressed. ) Thanks for review!
[Report This]Date: 04-12-13 - 07:04 am Title: Chapter 7
The plot thickens!!! Yeesh, talk about a rollercoaster of drama. Poor Logan, he must be confused as heck (and probably dying from blue balls??) But wow, Ororo. All those mixed signals. And what is this mysterious history, inquiring minds wish to know!
That said, her approach to sex is pretty telling. But I guess Logan makes it hard to say no...
Anyway. I love the way you write their introspection. The way you phrase things so simply and frankly but also thoughtfully is great to read.
PS, I hope you feel better soon. Find a girl friend, a pint of Cherry Garcia and a fun action movie with gratuitous explosions and unnecessarily shirtless men?
Author's Response: Yeah, they're pretty screwy. Hopefully something will change soon... And thanks for caring! It means a lot, though I suppose I should be used to the idea of flings not lasting. It's cool, though. Thanks for the review, it means a lot.
[Report This]Date: 04-12-13 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter 6
So in the movieverse, Scott and Ororo's friendship is a favorite of mine to read about! I feel like it doesn't get much attention (like, at all haha) so this chapter was lovely to read. I mean, there's still an obvious rift between them here. But also history (and what kind of history remains to be seen!!)
also gosh wow the way you tease with Ororo and Logan! Subtle, but wow. *fans self*
Date: 04-11-13 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yeesh, I hope they kiss and make up.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-13 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
WHAT?! BABS!!! YOU SHOULD'VE DONE A DOUBLE UPDATE!!! THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD MOMENT!!
Author's Response: Lol, SORRY! But it would've messed with the flow. Plus I wanna build suspense. Thanks for the review. Much obliged!
[Report This]Date: 04-06-13 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Good to see Ro opening up to other people besides Logan......Logan got his hand sliding down her back. :-). Love it.
Author's Response: Haha, well... This IS rated 18. Gotta have some sexy times. Thanks for the review. Much obliged.
[Report This]Date: 03-30-13 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Jean.... Quit being so annoying!!!!
Author's Response: She's not trying to be lol. She's just hurt.
[Report This]Date: 03-30-13 - 08:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Ah, I really like this fic! I like that it isn't very linear (or, it doesn't seem to be?) I dunno, I think it's hard to pull off a story made up of a series of scenes that don't really lead up to one another... but when done right, it's very poignant and lovely and artfully done. Which is what you do here!
And man, I love how it's really obvious how their friendship has soured. Don't get me wrong, it's extremely distressing because I love Jean and Ororo as BFFLs but here it's really obvious that they used to be friends and now they're just using this sweetness to mask how bitter they are. I wonder what happened there?
Author's Response: I tried to make it flow, but I can't seem to do it, but thank you for letting me feel like that's not such a bad thing. Your compliments are so sweet lol! I like them as friends, too, but I like the drama of being friendless. All will be revealed, but thank you for the review. Much obliged.
Date: 03-28-13 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, sad to hear that this may be scrapped. I am a little addicted to your RoLo fic - your work is my favorite of this couple right now.
That said, I am cautiously optimistic about this story. I like the pensive nature of it. This chapter was wonderful. You can really feel the sad, wistfulness that comes with remembering things. And to me, that Ororo is sharing that with Logan here is far more intimate than what they got up to before her talk. (except I would not complain about reading about that, too! haha.)
Anyway. Cautiously optimistic. Because I feel like this could get very sad, very fast and sad fics of this caliber make me want to jump off a cliff.
Hope you don't abandon this! I love it a lot already.
Author's Response: You make me so happy! I am gonna make sure you approach that cliff but don't jump off-- the muse for this story is dark and wants some deep shit (sorry-- I had shots before doing this so I just figured while I'm sobering I might do thinking stuff.) I'll stay faithful and thank you for the support/ review.
[Report This]Date: 03-17-13 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw. This scene seems a little random, but it was a nice scene, so don't get rid of it. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 03-17-13 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Aw, I like the conversation that went on between them. Though I'm wondering why the heck Storm left her family and friends behind.
[Report This]Date: 03-17-13 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 2
Jean, quit being such a wench!!! Golly! Why are you being so mean to your BFF?
Date: 03-11-13 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'd love to see an update, but you need to bump the rating to like 13 or whatever the next rating is from PG. just to keep you on the safe side. :)
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