Date: 03-24-13 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Aw! Storm just tell someone!!! You'll feel a million times better!
This feels so real! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you're into it. She's gonna have to tell someone soon, right? She's gonna start showing eventually. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
Date: 03-24-13 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow. I have to say I really like the way you intertwine how Ororo reacts to questions outwardly and yet reveal her feelings, which often oppose her outward reaction, to us as you go along; without missing a beat or confusing the situation. Nicely done.
W6C
Author's Response: I am so glad the thoughts are translating properly. I wanted them in italics but can't figure out how to do that, nor do I have the patience to spend time trying to figure out how.
Update Day in the Park. It was seriously the first fic I read on this site and it holds a special place in my heart.
THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW.