Date: 06-25-06 - 01:41 pm Title: Unleashed
I am throughly enjoying this story but the one thing that is KILLING me , is that everyone get to see...that suck :(
Author's Response: Sorry. But I did warn beforehand that this is one darrrkk story!!
Date: 08-31-05 - 01:51 pm Title: Unleashed
You really have to hurry and update this story. It's getting so good and I want them to hurry and breakout so they can kick everyones ass. Great job!
Author's Response: Breakout...so soon!! Still have a lot to write before I even think about that!!
Date: 08-31-05 - 04:15 am Title: Unleashed
For lack of a better term, holy shit.....
Author's Response: Realy *holy*....stay tuned for the next update!!
Date: 08-31-05 - 01:44 am Title: Unleashed
Godmaned cliffhangers. i hate 'em. what a tease. lol
Author's Response: Cliffhangers....keep you coming back!! Will update soon.
Date: 08-31-05 - 12:34 am Title: Unleashed
Ummm...holy fuck.
Yep. That about sums it up.
I had no idea you had such a dark core, Bats. I'm liking it!!!
I love the story and I love the frequent updates!! Your talent grows with each chapter!! Honestly.
Author's Response: Everyone has darkness within them....I am exploring mine here. Although I am trying to balance it out with the ligtness of 'Secrets' and the family feeling of 'First Impressions'...and then there are 'Dreams'
Date: 08-31-05 - 12:20 am Title: Unleashed
Wow. I am truly loving this story. Another excellent chapter. Things are really moving along nicely now, and you're doing a great job with knitting "canon" into the storyline and capturing the essence of these characters. But that cliffhanger you left us with was just eeevil! I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, so please do update soon!
Author's Response: I love my cliffhangers....its clearly visible in any of my fics!! GLad u liked the 'orgin' comics tie in with the movieverse Logan
Date: 08-30-05 - 11:22 pm Title: Unleashed
love the "dog" tie in
Author's Response: Thanks...I always wanted to use the specific *dog* part of 'origin'.
Date: 08-30-05 - 11:18 pm Title: Unleashed
of course another inducing 'Wow' fic. And all I can say is wow, the plot line is exceptional, the sexual intensity is maddening, and the characterisations are on point to getting the dynamics of the story across. excellent addition, and now of course I am waiting for the next chapter, which I am preparing myself for.
Sincerely,
VB
Author's Response: Thanks for the review....I am currently focussing mainly on getting Survival and Secrets completed....although I am far from it!!