Date: 04-01-08 - 12:02 am Title: Early Morning *Payback*
WOW!
*runs off to take a cold shower...*
lol, thats was awesome
Date: 09-13-07 - 12:40 am Title: Early Morning *Payback*
it's powerful stuff...and i would not be responsive at five thirty!!!
Date: 11-13-05 - 08:53 pm Title: Early Morning *Payback*
hot, incredibly hot.
Date: 08-29-05 - 08:05 pm Title: Early Morning *Payback*
Well after this little reading its kinda hard to breath, type, whatever... o_O Very describing little bit, in the good way. You write very good and it was a entertaining little story. Keep em coming and I will for sure read em.
Author's Response: Thanks for the entertaining review. I like to include small things that make the difference. Will update soon!!
Date: 08-29-05 - 07:05 pm Title: Early Morning *Payback*
Very nicely done! Hot, sexy, smart and funny all in one. I hope that you continue this series.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will definitely be continuing this series. Next up....A proper morning!!
Date: 08-29-05 - 04:49 pm Title: Early Morning *Payback*
sure i can leave one review, it's all those other Hits that i wish would leave reviews. this is worth a review! lol.
the first chap wasn't a PWP, the latter are, though,.. either way, ya gets no complaint from me. lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! Helps a lot...I had started this series as primarily PWP series....with just RoLo. The other characters may come in...or just be mentioned. But its RoLo all the way!!!
Date: 08-29-05 - 03:02 pm Title: Early Morning *Payback*
I love how they try to our do each other. Is this going to be a continuing series or are you leaving it at this. Great Job!
Author's Response: Will be continuing. Its 'Time of the Day' and the day has just begun....!! Thanks for the review!!
Date: 08-29-05 - 11:15 am Title: Early Morning *Payback*
This is Hot, saucy, and absolutely funny. The "one-up-manship" of it all.
Author's Response: For me the Ororo-Logan relationship is a match of equals, especially when I am writing from the comicverse, Uncannyverse in my case. In ultimateverse, she is still coming into her own. I like to include other moods with the sexual ones!!! This time it was funny!!