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Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-26-05 - 11:39 pm Title: Friday Night Rituals

Wow. I really liked how you approached this chapter. That's sweet that they go back to the place that they met, and replay the night. I really do love this story. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to provide a link between the two parts. Hence chapter 6 and Ororo's nar cryptic answer in the last chapter (15)!!

Reviewer: Windirder1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-17-05 - 11:07 am Title: Friday Night Rituals

Hey, just read and reread these chapters. I like the way you write drabbles, a lot conveyed with little words, not an easy skill, but one you seem to have mastered. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks Windy!! Glad u like the work. Just read n' reviews ur latest update. Now only if I could get the same results with my longer chapters!!

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