Date: 02-11-07 - 01:47 am Title: Ororo
nice. very nice. and sad. very, very, VERY sad.
Date: 10-26-05 - 05:41 pm Title: Ororo
Very well done. I haven't read the previous stories, but the story is complete enough for me to appreciate.
Date: 10-10-05 - 10:37 pm Title: Ororo
this cant be a trilogy there has to be a forth part i want more the others want more give us more plz lol
Date: 10-06-05 - 10:58 am Title: Ororo
Bravo! I am so glad I gave this story a chance. I mentioned before that this is one of the best short stories I've read in a very long time. You did an excellent job - simply wonderful!
Date: 10-06-05 - 10:57 am Title: Logan
I hate to say it but I haven't read the previous stories but I'm not really into stories where they have children however I read this at one of the yahoo groups yesterday and just had to tell you how much I loved this. Your portrayal of Logan was spot on - just about perfect. Many times when someone writes Logan they end up making him more of a pansy than anything but you pulled this off like you were born to write Logan. Wonderfully done!
Date: 10-03-05 - 08:19 am Title: Ororo
Thank you for adding another part! I really liked the first two, but they were so sad... and I'm such a sucker for happy endings. Well, at least when Ro and Logan are involved :) The scene at their child's marker was so sweet. Made my heart ache. I'm so happy to see them back together now. Are you planning on more parts? A new beginning for the two of them maybe... I'd be happy to read ;)
Date: 10-02-05 - 08:44 pm Title: Logan
Thank you for continuing with this series. Now I feel complete, mainly because I like to see those two get a happy ending. "Empty" and "Liar Liar" are wonderful, but I felt so sad after reading them. I love my RoLo and I like them to get a happy ending, you know. But this was perfect, though I wouldn't mind you adding to this story too. I'm insatiable, aren't I. LOL. That's what happens when you write good stories, you create addicts instead of readers, and I am definately an addict. I hope you decide to write something else for us soon. ;-)
Date: 10-02-05 - 05:07 pm Title: Ororo
Thank You. I really enjoyed this story.
Date: 10-02-05 - 05:00 pm Title: Logan
Yea!!! you continued this story, I am so happy that you did, going to read the next chapter. :)
Date: 10-02-05 - 12:20 pm Title: Ororo
This was perfect. I loved the first two parts and now I love this one thank you so much. :D
Date: 10-02-05 - 02:47 am Title: Ororo
Nice...although u could change the genres to incluse romance, atleast for this chapter. That's what I feel. I hope you do a follow up for this too....anothe kid maybe!!
Date: 10-02-05 - 02:44 am Title: Ororo
that was beautiful. i was wondering when you would pop back in and write something. glad you did