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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 04:43 am Title: Exposed

Logan knows Ororo is haveing trouble since the last mission. Maybe Ororo will let Logan help her if she wants help.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 03:31 pm Title: Exposed

This is beautiful. A wonderful start! So well written. It’s like you’ve put the comic Logan and Ororo into the movie which I really, really like. I just never liked the movie characters as much, they're less than what they should be, not enough umph!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-03-05 - 04:23 pm Title: Exposed

Okay, real like can suck sometimes...it keeps you busy, but I have finally finished reading the first chapter and I can't wait to get started on the next three. This is so wonderful. Well written as always. You have such a way with words. And you write Logan and Ororo so well. I love your stories because I always feel that they fit into verse. These are the stories we could be reading if Marel would get their act together...and hire you. LOL. I can't even explain how much I am loving this story, and all of your others, thank you so much for sharing with us. :-)

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 02:30 pm Title: Exposed

Very efficient in your set-up. Nothing lost in the drama and aftermath with the non-linear backstory. I commend you. Once again, your characters and dialogue are natural. Even a little bit more of a human Scott rather than the usual "just stiff & stoic" characterization. Beautifully done.

Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-05 - 01:15 am Title: Exposed

I enjoyed the read. I like the interaction between Scott and Logan and then Logan and Ororo.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Part of the challenge was including Scott, so I'm glad it seemed to work. I really appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Windirder1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-05 - 09:47 pm Title: Exposed

You have a wonderful gift for the written word. This flowed from beginning to end seemlessly and I was saddened to see it stop. I will pray to the gods of RoLo this evening that there is more to this tale brewing in that spectacular head of yours. Anxiously awaiting your next installment is where I will be...hope you are typing diligently. :D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much, windrider! I think I'm blushing now. ;) And no praying necessary - the whole thing is already written, I just had to break it up to post it here! *hugs*

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-05 - 03:13 pm Title: Exposed

i love when he notices her. It speaks volumes to his character. and thus, you did a very nice job conveying that. I'm excited, wanting to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Rhapsody! I surprise myself with how much I enjoy trying to write from Logan's perspective. LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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