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Reviewer: NemesisBecomin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-07 - 11:00 pm Title: Challenged

Dear Gods, I love your story. It's been too long since I've read it originally. Thank the heavens for you.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 06:08 am Title: Challenged

Logan andOroro have a new type of relationship built on trust,respect and caring for each other. Will it grow in to something more?.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 03:41 pm Title: Challenged

Oh my! This is so believable! I always wonder at what point does Logan start liking Ororo after being stuck on Jean throughout the first two movies so I really enjoyed this. You make it totally pausilbe. When he first became aware of his arousal for her when she tells him how she felt and still feels was just done so well. It was not only believable but I could almost feel the intensity and the sheer weight of her burden as I read. Now that's good writing!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-04-05 - 05:51 am Title: Challenged

I am not having the best of nights tonight. I got off work an hour later than I was supposed to, and I am extremely tired. I tried to make up some time on the drive home and got pulled over for speeding...I now have a $144 ticket I either have to pay or dispute in court, and I really don't want to do either. There was then a detour on the way home after I got the ticket. I proceeded to get lost, and stuck in traffic before I finally made it home. And a trip that should have taken me 30 to 40 minutes ended up taking 1 and a half hours...yet when I read this story, I can't help but smile. This story has definately brightened up my crazy night. Thanks for the 'pick-me-up'. :-P

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 02:57 pm Title: Challenged

Masterful. So utterly compelling and beautiful. I really cannot find words to express my complete enjoyment in this chapter. Damn near should be canon. Wow. I have to find the way to articulate better - this review is in no way worthy.

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-05 - 01:44 pm Title: Challenged

Please continue! You have to continue this story!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-05 - 06:21 am Title: Challenged

I love the way they open up towards each other, trusting each other by instinct. They talk about things they never told anyone before. Finally able to share. It doesn't take it all away but it must feel real good to have someone to talk to, who actually knows what you are talking about. Can't wait for the next part! Please hurry :)

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-05 - 12:06 am Title: Challenged

You are amazing...

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-05 - 11:58 am Title: Challenged

Damn! that was good. the levels of trust shifting and the budding relationship. perfect thing to bring them together, nightmares.

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