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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 07:15 am Title: Confronted

All Logan wants to do is help Ororo how ever he can. And hope she will forgive him if he has hurt her.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 03:51 pm Title: Confronted

You write as if you know Storm intimately – all that makes her who she is. Things I never even thought of. Your writing style is so clear and natural. You bring out all the emotions vividly in everyone, poor Ororo's fear, Logan's anger at himself for possibly making her take on more than she could handle, his concern. Simply well done.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-04-05 - 02:32 pm Title: Confronted

I know 'Ro's unconscious and all, but I get the distinct feeling there may be a little RoLo lovin' in the next chapter, but that could just be me. LOL. Your descriptions are beautiful. You give the reader everything they need to put themselves right there with the characters. Nicely done...as usual.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-17-05 - 08:09 pm Title: Confronted

Ugh, tunnels. Dark and narrow. "Is it smaller back here?" Poor Ro... hope she's gonna be alright. In Logans arms anyway but let's see, heh :)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 08:53 pm Title: Confronted

I wish i can say something more than the I liked it, but with anything i say, that's what it'll ball down to. lokking forward to the mext installation.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 03:07 pm Title: Confronted

I am once again ensnared. I thought to quickly read this and get started on my laundry, but no. I had to reread it, and soak it in. It's that good. Well done!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 11:38 am Title: Confronted

interesting! i like the way you're writing this.

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 06:06 am Title: Confronted

Beautifully written. Absolutely beautiful.

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