Date: 01-15-06 - 07:15 am Title: Confronted
All Logan wants to do is help Ororo how ever he can. And hope she will forgive him if he has hurt her.
Date: 12-08-05 - 03:51 pm Title: Confronted
You write as if you know Storm intimately – all that makes her who she is. Things I never even thought of. Your writing style is so clear and natural. You bring out all the emotions vividly in everyone, poor Ororo's fear, Logan's anger at himself for possibly making her take on more than she could handle, his concern. Simply well done.
Date: 11-04-05 - 02:32 pm Title: Confronted
I know 'Ro's unconscious and all, but I get the distinct feeling there may be a little RoLo lovin' in the next chapter, but that could just be me. LOL. Your descriptions are beautiful. You give the reader everything they need to put themselves right there with the characters. Nicely done...as usual.
Date: 10-17-05 - 08:09 pm Title: Confronted
Ugh, tunnels. Dark and narrow. "Is it smaller back here?" Poor Ro... hope she's gonna be alright. In Logans arms anyway but let's see, heh :)
Date: 10-16-05 - 08:53 pm Title: Confronted
I wish i can say something more than the I liked it, but with anything i say, that's what it'll ball down to. lokking forward to the mext installation.
Date: 10-16-05 - 03:07 pm Title: Confronted
I am once again ensnared. I thought to quickly read this and get started on my laundry, but no. I had to reread it, and soak it in. It's that good. Well done!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 10-16-05 - 11:38 am Title: Confronted
interesting! i like the way you're writing this.
Date: 10-16-05 - 06:06 am Title: Confronted
Beautifully written. Absolutely beautiful.