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Reviewer: dudtheman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05-24-12 - 03:00 am Title: Embraced

sweet story =)

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-07 - 11:29 pm Title: Embraced

Totally.

Once I find a way to get around this whole being heterosexual thing, I'm askin ya ta marry me. TOTALLY.

Reviewer: Slowly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-26-06 - 01:12 pm Title: Embraced

Aw man. I was hoping there would be more. Great job, though. :)

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-21-06 - 02:17 am Title: Embraced

Great story! Loved the slow building tension, the action/description and the interplay between the characters (especially RoLo).

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 08:14 am Title: Embraced

Well Logan and Ororo have found each other and they both know they have connection that goes all the way to there souls.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 03:56 pm Title: Embraced

I actually teared up as I read the ending. This was such a beautiful story, just truly wonderful. I don't even have enough adjectives to describe it! Superb. Just very simple, very realistic, nothing overdone, all so believable and touching. Touching is a good description. I don't recall being touched by such a story or at least not in a great while and then they're usually death stories and one shots. Even the parts with Scott and Logan had a nice emotional feel to them, Logan's coming to terms with the boy leader who rather grows up and especially where they were working on the car together, perfect male bonding. Truthfully I don't think this story could get much better! Lovely job, Minarya! I'm glad you finally found your way to the Realm!

Reviewer: Syrinx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-05 - 11:18 pm Title: Embraced

Well, I'm in love. I've always been crazy about your stories, but that last section put a stupid grin on my face for at least fifteen minutes and thus it made my day. In fact, my fiance just told me the look on my face is "pure happiness." So thank you. :)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 09:41 pm Title: Embraced

I really loved this! So sad to see it end. You don't plan on writing a follow up, do you? Because that would be just great :) I enjoyed your story a lot! Thanks :)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 11:02 pm Title: Embraced

wonderful! Subtle and yet i hate to see this end. :)

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 05:50 pm Title: Embraced

Did it have to end? How about a little glimpse into Japan. I'd love to see Yukio, Ro and Logan together. LOL. This was exceptionally well written and thoroughly enjoyable. I look forward to much more from you. :D

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 03:31 pm Title: Embraced

Heh. Excellently done. Really. Not sappy or over the top. The proper mix of natural romance and the everyday awkwardness such first steps take. I applaud you. And if it ended here it would be perfect. It it continued, I would have no fear of the excellent storytelling to come and would welcome it. I congratulate you on an excellent piece and bubble over in murderous envy in this accomplishment.

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