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Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-04-05 - 05:51 am Title: Challenged

I am not having the best of nights tonight. I got off work an hour later than I was supposed to, and I am extremely tired. I tried to make up some time on the drive home and got pulled over for speeding...I now have a $144 ticket I either have to pay or dispute in court, and I really don't want to do either. There was then a detour on the way home after I got the ticket. I proceeded to get lost, and stuck in traffic before I finally made it home. And a trip that should have taken me 30 to 40 minutes ended up taking 1 and a half hours...yet when I read this story, I can't help but smile. This story has definately brightened up my crazy night. Thanks for the 'pick-me-up'. :-P

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-03-05 - 04:23 pm Title: Exposed

Okay, real like can suck sometimes...it keeps you busy, but I have finally finished reading the first chapter and I can't wait to get started on the next three. This is so wonderful. Well written as always. You have such a way with words. And you write Logan and Ororo so well. I love your stories because I always feel that they fit into verse. These are the stories we could be reading if Marel would get their act together...and hire you. LOL. I can't even explain how much I am loving this story, and all of your others, thank you so much for sharing with us. :-)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 09:41 pm Title: Embraced

I really loved this! So sad to see it end. You don't plan on writing a follow up, do you? Because that would be just great :) I enjoyed your story a lot! Thanks :)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 11:02 pm Title: Embraced

wonderful! Subtle and yet i hate to see this end. :)

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 05:50 pm Title: Embraced

Did it have to end? How about a little glimpse into Japan. I'd love to see Yukio, Ro and Logan together. LOL. This was exceptionally well written and thoroughly enjoyable. I look forward to much more from you. :D

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 03:31 pm Title: Embraced

Heh. Excellently done. Really. Not sappy or over the top. The proper mix of natural romance and the everyday awkwardness such first steps take. I applaud you. And if it ended here it would be perfect. It it continued, I would have no fear of the excellent storytelling to come and would welcome it. I congratulate you on an excellent piece and bubble over in murderous envy in this accomplishment.

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 02:57 pm Title: Challenged

Masterful. So utterly compelling and beautiful. I really cannot find words to express my complete enjoyment in this chapter. Damn near should be canon. Wow. I have to find the way to articulate better - this review is in no way worthy.

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 02:30 pm Title: Exposed

Very efficient in your set-up. Nothing lost in the drama and aftermath with the non-linear backstory. I commend you. Once again, your characters and dialogue are natural. Even a little bit more of a human Scott rather than the usual "just stiff & stoic" characterization. Beautifully done.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-17-05 - 08:09 pm Title: Confronted

Ugh, tunnels. Dark and narrow. "Is it smaller back here?" Poor Ro... hope she's gonna be alright. In Logans arms anyway but let's see, heh :)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 08:53 pm Title: Confronted

I wish i can say something more than the I liked it, but with anything i say, that's what it'll ball down to. lokking forward to the mext installation.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 03:07 pm Title: Confronted

I am once again ensnared. I thought to quickly read this and get started on my laundry, but no. I had to reread it, and soak it in. It's that good. Well done!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 11:38 am Title: Confronted

interesting! i like the way you're writing this.

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-05 - 06:06 am Title: Confronted

Beautifully written. Absolutely beautiful.

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-05 - 01:44 pm Title: Challenged

Please continue! You have to continue this story!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-05 - 06:21 am Title: Challenged

I love the way they open up towards each other, trusting each other by instinct. They talk about things they never told anyone before. Finally able to share. It doesn't take it all away but it must feel real good to have someone to talk to, who actually knows what you are talking about. Can't wait for the next part! Please hurry :)

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