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Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-05 - 12:06 am Title: Challenged

You are amazing...

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-05 - 11:58 am Title: Challenged

Damn! that was good. the levels of trust shifting and the budding relationship. perfect thing to bring them together, nightmares.

Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-05 - 01:15 am Title: Exposed

I enjoyed the read. I like the interaction between Scott and Logan and then Logan and Ororo.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Part of the challenge was including Scott, so I'm glad it seemed to work. I really appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Windirder1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-05 - 09:47 pm Title: Exposed

You have a wonderful gift for the written word. This flowed from beginning to end seemlessly and I was saddened to see it stop. I will pray to the gods of RoLo this evening that there is more to this tale brewing in that spectacular head of yours. Anxiously awaiting your next installment is where I will be...hope you are typing diligently. :D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much, windrider! I think I'm blushing now. ;) And no praying necessary - the whole thing is already written, I just had to break it up to post it here! *hugs*

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-05 - 03:13 pm Title: Exposed

i love when he notices her. It speaks volumes to his character. and thus, you did a very nice job conveying that. I'm excited, wanting to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Rhapsody! I surprise myself with how much I enjoy trying to write from Logan's perspective. LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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