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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 02:53 am Title: Trust

Although my review mean nothing in the greater scheme of thing being how this is a finished story I just though I would anyway. This chapter wasn't "oh my gosh" but it was cute seeing everything through Marie's eyes

Author's Response: Every Review matters, even ones after the completion of the story. After all, it is the reviews that are the only 'payment' we free-writers get. And who knows, why ideas can we from a reader's POV. Glad u liked the 'cuteness'.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 09:29 am Title: Trust

Logan loves Ororo and he wants to be with her but does she feel the same? Logan and Rogue love each other and trust each other just like lover's but not in a physical way more than family.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-21-05 - 12:52 am Title: Trust

Of course the greatest new story by BW. I love this.....This story just has so much potential and i can't wait to see the dynamics between Wolverine and Jean (furthered), Storm and Jean, Storm and Wolvie, Scott with Jean, Wolvie and Storm. This is going to be mind blowing because it will also affect the students to see their elders and teachers in such turmoil. And the greatest part is I get to hate Jean all I want!! Feel so bad for scott he does get teh bad end of the stick!

Author's Response: Have some Storm *talk* coming up in the next chapter....but with Wolvie or Jeannie. As for hating Jean, it is not as much a question of her being evil, as it is of her not being able to handle the Phoenix powers properly!!

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-20-05 - 08:24 pm Title: Trust

Sorry Bats for the mistake, don't hold it against me. I like the different views from people, I would like to see scott, but I would also like to see the Professor. Not to many people seem to go with Charles views on the whole situation. I like please continue.

Author's Response: Nevah mind!! Scooter will definitely come, but not so soon. And the Prof, although he will be a difficult one, depending on how much he decides to know, will have something from him too. Will update soon.....and thanks for your reviews. Always appreciate when readers submit them!!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-20-05 - 06:28 pm Title: Trust

I like hearing another perspective on the goings-on of the mansion. I like the Marie/Logan dynamic. I'd love to read what Scooter thinks of all of this, Logan and above all Ororo. Please tell me she isn't going to be Ok with Wolverine screwing Jean. Even if she and he aren't together, how can he professt that she owns his heart while he's stickin' it to her best friend? I can't see Ro just being hunky-dory with that. I think she'd be disappointed, and hurt and feel betrayed. (But that's just me) Anyways, I look forward to another update.

Author's Response: Ororo is not like the Ororo we genenrally read about or see in the movies and neither are the others. That much you must have gotten already. And for the other things, wait until they become clearer. In the mean time let me see who can I get next for a review. I had planned on Hank, but maybe not for the next one. Someone totally removed. Also haven't decided where to place Gambit....i.e. whether a new student/teacher or someone who is already known, as in the comics. Lets see!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-20-05 - 01:24 pm Title: Trust

Totally different vibe in this chapter :) I really like how you pointed out the connection and deep understanding between Marie and Logan. No fear towards each other. Just pure trust. I loved her observation on Ro and Logan sitting next to each other, eating in comfortable silence. As for a specific character's view... actually Scott comes into mind here. Is he totally unaware of what's going on? Or is he just ignoring it, hoping that everything will be alright once Jean and he are married?

Author's Response: I plan on doing on Scott, but maybe not the next one. I want to build further with a couple of other P.O.Vs. before I get down to the either Scooter, Logan or 'Ro. And although it takes from the movie characters, it is not very faithful to their depiction. Not all is black and white....there are a lot of grays here.

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