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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 01:59 am Title: Confessions

Is it over for Logan and Ororo forever will they ever be together? What about Jean and Scott?

Reviewer: Pats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-05 - 09:15 pm Title: Confessions

Great work BW! Kinda mirrors RL for me right now. Miss you guy.

Author's Response: *Mirrors RL"....what did that mean? Will update soon, and also post on the forums. Later!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-05 - 04:45 am Title: Confessions

I've been thinking along those lines for a while now. All I really want to hear is Storm's side, we get so much of everyone else and what their thinking but never really her. I realize she's utterly complex, because you get the impression of her based on everyone else which is varying to say the least, so to hear the way her mind works is going to be excellent. I love this new chapter, finally Storm knows. Great news! And I'm happy she learned it from Wolverine and not Jean. But this makes me wonder how Storm is going to interact with Jean because in this whole story so far the real victim is poor Scott. I wonder if Storm is going to force Jean to tell him, or their going to keep it a secret. Or if Scott will eventually find out. Now I do have one question......what does this mean: 'She sits and she prays….for herself, for him, for her and for the man sleeping in her bed. She sits and she prays' I'm trying to figure out who's the man sleeping in her bed? Who's bed? Jean's or Storms? I'm assuming not storm and Jean, but if it's jean has Scott come back? Or is that a figure of speech? VB

Author's Response: Well, I *had* said that 'Ro is going to the main character in this fic, even though she doesn't come a lot on her own. As for telling Scooter....some things are best left unsaid. And the bed is Jean's and the man is her fiance.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 09:57 pm Title: Confessions

*SLAP*! YES!!! Way to go, Ro! Man, he deserved that! ... and did he just say she/it was worth it?! OMG... *faints in disbelieve* And what now? Is he running again? As soon as things get a bit more complicated he flees the emotional battle field, leaving the remaining parties to deal with everything and each other on their own? I hope Ro's about to stop him now, to tell him he cannot just run away. Not this time! He's such a jerk here! I want to slap him a few time myself right now! Ro darling, go ahead and fry him!

Author's Response: He is running. Being chucked out. The ball is in Ororo's court. Will try and make the next chapter in a way that the remaining parties get involved.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 01:58 pm Title: Confessions

"laying beside her? Where did I write that? If I did, I must have meant Scooter and Jean" Actually it was a missunderstanding from my part; "for her and for the man sleeping in her bed" I assumed it was from Ororos POV, and that she was sitting in bed. Thought I needed to clarify myself a bit. Just the jumping around that gets me sometimes, thought I was good at keeping up, seems I am not.

Author's Response: I know that some of the language in this fic. is a bit confusing. That is not from a mistake, but deliberately done so. Will try and update soon....btw, it was Scooter.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 11:25 am Title: Confessions

I am about to commit the ultimate blasphamy...but after his answer that she(Jean) was worth it...do me a favor. PLEASE. He needs to hurt!! Pretty please (and I know...) let Ro fall in love with someone else. (Kurt, or Remy or Nathan or who the fuck ever) and not call Logan back. And yes!! YES! YES! she has the right to feel betrayed, by both Logan and her so-called "sister" . Let Wolverine come back to a happy Ro, not pining for his worthless ass. If you would be so kind.

Author's Response: Well, I will try and explain, the *worth it* answer. Let me think about it. As for someone else, you can forget that....and even it does happen, it is NOT going to Remy. I'd sooner pair her with Pietro than with Gambit. As for the betrayal, you still have to get her end of the story. Hopefully that will answer a few questions and satiate you.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 10:02 am Title: Confessions

Who, what, why? So many questions so little understanding, what would make him tell her, why tell her? I understand that one would want to be on “the level” with each other but... that sort of reaction was kind of expected >_< who was the man laying beside her? Oh the pure torture of not knowing :) I do think you enjoy using flashbacks, as they seem to be a common theme sometimes. Not that it’s anything wrong with it, though I for one would prefer longer flashbacks as opposed to numerous flashbacks. Ah well, hopefully the next part will be imminent, as otherwise I will tether on the brink of frustration ;p

Author's Response: laying beside her? Where did I write that? If I did, I must have meant Scooter and Jean. As for the flashbacks, the theme of using smaller and more than one flashback in a single chapter, is only for this fic....a sort of past and present melding. Will try and post the next one soon!!

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