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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 03:04 am Title: Time

Will Rogue sat anything about Logan and Jean? Will Ororo sind for L ogan to come to her? A nd what about this new teacher David?

Reviewer: Pats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-09-05 - 05:43 pm Title: Time

Loved it, you -- I have no idea how --- are geting better! Gonna go read the others now!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-08-05 - 09:14 am Title: Time

Loved Rogue's outburst. Logan would have been very proud if he'd been there, heh. I really would like Scott to find out. If he still wants Jean then it's fine with me, but he deserves to have a choice in this. Uhm... I'm worried about RoLo, heh. Even though you said not to, but well... as things look right now it's all pretty screwed up. Davis Cameron... no idea who that is *lol* I guess I have to find me some issues of X-Treme X-Men to find out :)

Author's Response: Yup. As Rogue is shown as 100% pro-Logan, had to have her get atleast one in....or couple or more. As for the *no worry* it was limited to the first few chapters and meant to show that RoLo would come...happy or sad, can't say. An' get those XXM issues.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-08-05 - 04:18 am Title: Time

Hmmm.....nice piece. I'm a little perplexed as to who Rogue called a "heartless bitch" not for anything, but if it's to ?Storm, I don't know how Storm sent Wolverine away, he wanted to go, or did she say something and I missed it. And Davis Cameron?! Is he the surfer guy? who has a mutant sister? I wonder where this will lead?! Maybe Jean might find another playmate in him..... I also do hope it comes out to Scott...Jean shouldn't be able to have her cake and eat it too! VB

Author's Response: Hope the next chapters answers a few of your questions. And yes, Davis Cameron is the surfer guy. I've used him to do away with the usual Forges and Bishops. As for Jean, her part doesn't look very promising now. Its mostly 'Ro related.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-05 - 08:59 pm Title: Time

I had to brush up my knowledge on this Davis person, and I would say I concur with your view perhaps, at least in a way that he was a person easily forgotten and frankly not that great a person ;p Rogue, well she got a bit temperamental there o_O it made me think that she perhaps really hates the two women Ororo/Jean now for “pushing” him away from the school. Which I do so hope is not the case concerning Ororo :) Jean I could not care less about, the only “phoenix” persona I ever liked is Rachel. Lastly; “no shopping binges” hehe major bummer for the trio :)

Author's Response: Well, I didn't want to go with the usual suspects, Forge, Bishop, Angel. So decided to get in blondie. Rogue's temperament is going to have more play in the next chapter. As for relation with Jean, that hasn't been elaborated in this fic and I am not so sure that I want to. You have to understand, Rogue knew what Logan and Ororo had going on between them....hence the anger. Jean had no committment. And, no more shopping binges. That's too fluffy for a fic like this. Already got one fluffy chapter. Not anymore.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-05 - 12:49 pm Title: Time

Good update. Some interesting developments. Davis Cameron? There's an unexpected twist, considering his HUGE thing for Ororo, it could prove interesting. He's a bit immature for our girl,(although he is a hottie surfer god), but that may be exactly what she needs in the wake of the Logan-Jean dibbacle. Looking for more on this story soon. Longer chapter maybe??

Author's Response: Thanks for the term 'Surfer God'. Will use it in the next chapter. As for longer chapters, one can only get so much on the P.O.V.s. Well, at least I can. Will see how can I keep you interested.

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