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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 04:33 am Title: Union

Confesion is food for the soul. But what of Rogue and Gambit? Will Ororo and Logan ever come together?

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:11 pm Title: Union

Nice to get some more info about the motivations and reasons that let to the things that happened. Jean came back, Scott turned towards another with his problems and fears, everyone was sort of afraid of her except him. Logan was the only one not afraid so she turned to him... He still should not have given in though... Mmh, I'm wondering what's the deal with Emma. More and more people seem to be involved in all this. It's becoming one huge interwoven thing... What's Emma's part? Or did she just listen to Scott hoping he would turn away from Jean more and more until finally finding interst in her? She's a telepath after all... she didn't do anything nasty, did she?

Author's Response: You sumarized very succiently. The deal with Emma...I have a general idea on where I want this fic to go for an ending. Just have to fill in certain blanks. Emma is one of them, the suspension I have set up is another. I just hope that I don't get tangled in my own web.

Reviewer: Pats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-05 - 04:40 pm Title: Union

This was well written, and as you know I do not care for Scott or Jean that much but this was good. Thanks for sharing, BW!

Author's Response: Well, things for both of them are going as a yo-yo, as is clear in my latest update....and it is still not over.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-05 - 07:53 pm Title: Union

Review, review.. Such a hard thing to do :) well as for the written word I would say it was a good chapter, there was tension and drama and whatnot, though the members of the story should have preferably been Ororo/Logan or something, as I have said, Jean is no fun :p Don’t really know what to say about the larger subject for the chapter.. Betrayal and forgiveness and such things are always hard to see eye to eye on, as everyone have different opinions. Though I will say this, I think Scotts actions in this reflects the way he “forgave” Wolverine in Ultimate X-men #33, and I think him to be a great man because he is that way with almost everything, even if he has a stick up his bum ;p

Author's Response: Uh-oh, you like Scooter. Then you are definitely not going to like where I am going right now. Well, you can't win them all....can you?

Reviewer: Jamie B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-12-05 - 02:33 am Title: Union

This chapter explains a few things, but I still don't understand what happened between Ro and Logan. Were they together? Other than my silly question, another great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-11-05 - 09:57 pm Title: Union

Ok, Scooter and Jean married. I'm okay with. Ro feeling guilt over Logan. Fuck him. He's a douche bag. Her turning Remy away? Never happen. Rogue should just die. That would make me happy. Uhm, yeah. That about covers it...and oh, now that Remy's free...? (A girl could hope). I love my RoLo, but this Logan deserves a good lesson on how to treat a woman. More soon?

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-11-05 - 09:20 pm Title: Union

Heh....you do realize that was a very weak attempt at in some way defending Jean..or in some way pacifying what she did by Storm and Scott's indiscretion. Keep in mind I like Scott, always have. No matter that the case in question went as far as a kiss and probably longer. It is still not compared to what Jean and Wolverine did, knowingly and without consideration. I have no respect for those that commit the act of adultery, and in Jean's case she did. She was malicious and I'm sorry the case of wanting something...from wolverine..all of the sudden now she can talk to Scott. What of the past?! Was there something then keeping her from telling him? What makes now so different?! She's still a bitch. And I don't see how what Storm was still so bad. I'm not saying she's innocent, but at the time of the kiss, Jean was dead...and even a month so. I can see how wanting someone something to make you feel alive, causes things to happen. But unlike Jean and Wolverine they stopped. I'm sure that a plethora of opportunities came up for Scott and Storm to do something. But neighter did. I'm sure Jean didn't come back 2 months later. Possibly a year.... And yet we see nothing sexual happened between Scott and Storm. And yet with Jean and Wolverine..they took advantage of all opportunites and on a continous basis. Sorry, but that is bloody cruel. Keeping in mind that Scott and Storm were alive and well and living in the same roof, even if Scott traveled. I'm sorry but the above attempt did not seem sinful, it seemed understandbly wrong, but nothing in the league of Jean and Wolverine. Wolverine is still a selfish prick in this story and there's nothing you've done to deflect that view point. I'm still wondering why he had to run away...what a turkey. He has to realize that if he wants something he has to fight for it. You don't go miles away and hope on a phone call. At this point this was like why I was sort of rooting for the Surfer guy, because Wolverine isn't worth it. And Rogue got's to get over herself. I still don't see how Wolverine is so innocent over Storm. But then she probaly doesn't know the whole story..only part of it. And why do I get the feeling that after the kiss Storm told Wolverine about the incident, since they became best buds. Then did Wolverine feel a need to one up Storm. Or do something with Jean becasue storm wouldn't let him get as close as Scott did? Or maybe He didn't try to get as close to Storm as Scott did? He's a prick and come back and fight for the woman he supposedly loves (even with major opposition)!! And Rogue needs to get the whole story, so she can get off her high horse!! Storm....well Storm she needs to go away. She needs to get out of the X-mansion, maybe go to Africa without telling everyone. She needs a vacaction from all the drama and stupidity! I'd feel suffocated in that house...I'd need to purge myself; as I believe she might need to (where else but home can do that for a soul...hmmmm?)!!! Keep up the great work..but you haven't made Storm into the evil one....or as prickish as Wolverine and Jean. VB

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