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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 05:16 am Title: Musings

Rogue is back but she is alone Logan is not there because Ororo wanted time ands space so he left. And Rogue and Gambit are no longer together as acouple.Will they ever be a couple again?

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:20 pm Title: Musings

Okay, so now they are married... yay. Where's Logan? Is he coming back anytime soon? I do hope so... I really need some RoLo, even if it's a big fight between them :) I don't care, I just need some RoLo! He shouldn't have run away... she should have stopped him, should have fried his ass... But wait, that has nothing to do with this chap, heh. Sorry, I'm having problems right now keeping my thoughts together. Even typing this takes me quite some time. Maybe I should just write in German, heh :) At least I would be able to understand myself then... Uhm, where was I? ... I liked the Professor's point of view. He just wants the best for everyone, tries to help where he is able to but doesn't want to pry and refuses to peek into their heads to get the answers he needs. He knows a lot, has known everyone for a long time but still doesn't know the details. The details I need to know btw! I'm getting antsy... so many questions but so few answers.

Author's Response: Logan is back. You will see from the next chapter onwards. Hope you get well soon. Have been sick myself, the sudden weather change and an abrupt konking off of the heater caused it. The Professor is from the movieverse and is a good guy. No ulterior motives like the guy from the Ultimateverse.

Reviewer: Pats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-05 - 04:47 pm Title: Musings

I thought you captured Charles well, my friend. Very good, as always lease keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks Pats!! Was my first time in dealing with the Professor. Usually, I use him as a token character, but not in this one.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-05 - 10:30 pm Title: Musings

This is where I got the impression it was Emma. Not crazy...seriously, i'm not-- Looking at each of them now, he feels the almost familiar level of camaraderie. She is the Storm, she takes everything in her step. She is that way. He is the team-leader. He has to take everything in his step. He has learnt to do it. The redhead standing next to him has played a big part in that journey, one that started the first day each of them came to him, young, inexperienced, fearful of the world around them. They have learned to control their gifts and during their time here, have found love with each other. Found and almost lost it as well. That leads him to his next subject, the platinum blonde woman dressed in her familiar and almost standard white. ----- “Scott, Ororo, I would like you to meet Ms. Emma Frost, Had he not asked the telepath to come to the school, his team-leader would have turned to him with his emotional problems and fears. Instead, he turned to her, leaving the woman he loved and who was in a fragile state herself, all alone. So, uh, yeah. Names would help.

Author's Response: Scooter's part in all of this is getting all mixed up. I still can't decide what to do with him. I have taken him from a oblivious but faithful lover to a possible adulterer husband....the latest update is not helping matters either. Getting the names out now!!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-05 - 08:18 pm Title: Musings

Xavier still is and will perhaps always be the personification of the mutant goal that the X-Men fight to bring about. His ever fatherly figure continues to guide all within the big family that the X-Men is and I think at least you came close enough in making me feel that he was that caring father that looked upon his children and wondered “what would the wise thing to do be?”. Though I see that he still has the problems of a mere mortal ;p I sure hope now that the professor is properly introduced to the story he will make things happen, or at least be that shoulder to rest upon when times are bad (like right now). Keenly awaits the coming chapters to see where this will be taken, perhaps it is time for some Ro or Logan to balance things.

Author's Response: Thanks for the support on Xavier. Ro and Logan, both are coming out now!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-05 - 05:41 pm Title: Musings

Just a question read previous review...how did the previous reviewer get that Emma was the one that Scott was having the affair with. When I read standard white with platinum hair I was still thiking of Storm..and in that white uniform she has in the comics.......Man..I'm lost...maybe you should give names so we can be clear.... I'm still trying ot figure out what Rogue was saying about which guy (I don't even know) in the ending sentences!

Author's Response: Just to be clear....it was both Emma and Ororo. That's all my story and I am sticking to it!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-05 - 05:36 pm Title: Musings

hiya....hmmm!!!! I liked this chapter, if for nothing else but Xavier. Even if he has gone crazy and tried to destroy the X-men a few times I still like PX. So this was a great installment. As for the other characters. Well happy for Scott he seems to like being cuckold and he was again cuckold again by the lame excuse Jean gave for defending what she did....Poor man, those glasses mess up his vision. As for Wolverine leave him where he is....or have him come back for Rogue..since she feels so lost without his presence and is defending him so much. At least he has someone who appreciates him and then she (Rogue) can stay as angry as she wants with everyone and people can just move on beyond this. Storm.....well if not the surfer, leave her alone man. I mean this is like really bad soap opera drama. I love her and to see her sucked into typical Wolverine drama is too much for me. Didn't he have sex with Mystique in this story....what more can you ask about stupidity! And yet he claims to love Storm. Her best bud and one of her worst enemies to get your kicks...well that's just class. Just sto keep safe from STI's hook Storm up with someone else or no one. Now Gambit......don't really know what to do with that. You can create a threesome then. Have Gambit/Rogue/Wolverine as the ultimate couple and leave the rest as they are. This chapter was a great introduction of Xavier...but even if Xavier knows what can he really offer. These are adults with their own mind, and self-destructive personality when I see Wolverine and Jean. I mean what can be done to save them. Do they want saving? Then it makes me think of how in the past 2 or 3 chapters the Summer's relationship has strengthened. I'm not seeing that. I feel as if both Jean and Scott remained and got married because it was the given thing to do it. It was understandable and both don't really know about being apart. Jean claimes that she didn't some kind of verification of what she was and Wolverine gave her that...but if she really loved Scott, would she have done it?! Those then ask Scott and Storm weren't interrupted would they have done something? And if so would they have regretted it. I think Scott is far too loyal for that. And that's the problem. Scott is loyal to Jean. A relationship on love is not based entirely on loyality that is just part of it next to trusting the person. And Storm what would happen........It would ahve come close but I think the two parties involved wouldn't have done a betrayal, or full on adultery (which it's not since Jean was classed as dead) because of their devotion to Jean memory or otherwise. I'm a bit ticked that this impression is given. Even if they did have sex and they did not regret it, it would not continue on because Storm if not Scott's rational being would take over because they know they don't love each other like that!! But Wolverine and Jean continued on for months...shame really! Well I'm waiting for the next chapter..but I'm also in waiting with baited breath for X-verse's new chapter!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-05 - 05:25 pm Title: Musings

Ok, let me get this straight. It was Emma that Scott was fooling around with...not Ororo. Then why was Jean bitching about Ororo? And Emma not mentioned until just now? I'd figure that for a key element in the story. And so Friggin' what that Ro kept Logan at arm's length--obviously he didn't deserve to come any closer. He betrayed her while supposedly in love with her...there is no excuse. Whether they were 'officially' together or not, it's betrayal, plain and simple. BTW...where the hell is Logan anyways? And I appreciate the reflections of the supporting cast, but i was under the impression that Ororo was going to be the center of this fic. So far it's more about everyone BUT ororo and Logan. I'm not trying to be overly critical, but at this point, I have to say I am quickly losing interest in what could have been one of your best stories.

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