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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 06:59 am Title: Returning

Thing should be strange once Logan is back home,he had to come for Rogue's sake. But does Ororo forgive Logan, and does she even want him around her given her involvement with David?

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:33 pm Title: Returning

Thanks for the dedication! :) And I'm back with my reviews as you might have noticed already... Just ignore them if they appear a bit confused right now :) So Logan spent all this time in the woods on his own? ... nice! I like that. He's pretty sexy in this feral state. But what's wrong now between Scott and Jean? I'm seriously thinking I missed something. Aw, damn Ro! Why do you have to be so mature? Why didn't you just let him explain why you got suspended? Hmpf... :)

Author's Response: I am answering your reviews as you type them. Glad could catch u at the same time. The Jeannie-Scooter thing and Ororo, Scooter, Emma suspension will be highlighted...soon!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 07:46 pm Title: Returning

I would say its still too soon to get a glimpse at where this is finally going, as I am confused in the sense that I do not know what is going on (no surprise there though;)… But answers will come, but I don’t want or have the patience to wait for the next chapters, heh. Story wise, it’s already been said, a good neutral chapter or rather a chapter without any bigger confrontations or outbursts (darn). I actually got a bit worried I had the wrong story for just a sec there. About the return of Wolverine, other then the fact that I want to see more of RoLo and a helluva (sorry for the language) solution to this “little” situation, there is not much more to say ^^ (feel the pressure;) just for information; I don’t really like Scooter as a character, I do sort of respect him though.. Other then that he’s just that character that Wolverine taunts and messes with and so forth.

Author's Response: I am kinda ready to wind this down, hence Logan's return. No use in excess angst. I seem to have done enough. Three couples man. Five people, Scooter, Jeannie, Emma, Ororo and Logan, and all types of pairings. Whew. Will see what to do with Ororo and Logan.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 06:56 pm Title: Returning

BW-->Hmmm....I'll give you a break...for now. I'm still not liking how Rogue-centric this fic is, or the fact that Storm seems to be in serene mode. I see her giving a little hell in return. For the love of all that is RoLo DO NOT let Logan off lightly!!!! For cripes sake he banged Jean and Mystique!! Seriously, the man needs to suffer. (Not just overall--specifically related to Ororo.) I'm not a huge Davis fan, but anything to make Logan pay for what he did. :D Otherwise than that, good update. I expect another one soon---and no bitchin' about me updating. I have my reasons. (I will update soon, however.) ;)

Author's Response: The Rogue-centricity is because she has the inside deal on Logan, even things that he might not say out loud. Think of her as his PR person. Lets see how you like the new chapter.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 07:15 am Title: Returning

Hmmm...... I'm unsure. I still want to know what's up with Rogue now..and I hope that Cameron guy can take a backseat. Wolverine has redeemed himself a bit. But you seem to forget, he still ran away. And I want Storm to remind him of that. This is not about forgiveness any more. You don't run away you persevere. You fight against the anger and you find resolution, you beg, you plead.....you do all you can so she can be reminded of who you are and were to them. But did he do that? No....he left, leaving all that anger that was to be let out, to fester and build up. I think Wolverine has tons to answer for. And this is a good neutral chapter. I'm still looking on finding out on Storm. Her thoughts, and of course the energey there. I wonder how this is going to be played out in the end. I do want her response to Wolverine to be volatile, as I'm sure it will be. I'm also a bit scared as to Storm and Wolverine's story taking a backseat to Rogue. It's so significant that not to give it's due is silly, and makes the direction pointless. But to give it much importance, then we take away from Storm and Wolverine and that is extremely important. I'm still not liking the role of Ro to mommy dearest. She's a passionate woman, and to marginalize her chracter to mummy with a few outings with Cameron is sad. Furthermore Jean should be doing it, I still don' know why she's been demoted and I'd like to know. But I think Jean should get some practice in! Anyway awaiting the next chappie...as Wolverine comes back...I better see Cameron in it...and what you plan on doing with that waste of pink flesh(I believe this is a quote from abomination a comic character)! VB

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 07:11 am Title: Returning

Hmmm...... I'm unsure. I still want to know what's up with Rogue now..and I hope that Cameron guy can take a backseat. Wolverine has redeemed himself a bit. But you seem to forget, he still ran away. And I want Storm to remind him of that. This is not about forgiveness any more. You don't run away you persevere. You fight against the anger and you find resolution, you beg, you plead.....you do all you can so she can be reminded of who you are and were to them. But did he do that? No....he left, leaving all that anger that was to be let out, to fester and build up. I think Wolverine has tons to answer for. And this is a good neutral chapter. I'm still looking on finding out on Storm. Her thoughts, and of course the energey there. I wonder how this is going to be played out in the end. I do want her response to Wolverine to be volatile, as I'm sure it will be. I'm also a bit scared as to Storm and Wolverine's story taking a backseat to Rogue. It's so significant that not to give it's due is silly, and makes the direction pointless. But to give it much importance, then we take away from Storm and Wolverine and that is extremely important. I'm still not liking the role of Ro to mommy dearest. She's a passionate woman, and to marginalize her chracter to mummy with a few outings with Cameron is sad. Furthermore Jean should be doing it, I still don' know why she's been demoted and I'd like to know. But I think Jean should get some practice in! Anyway awaiting the next chappie...as Wolverine comes back...I better see Cameron in it...and what you plan on doing with that waste of pink flesh(I believe this is a quote from abomination a comic character)! VB

Author's Response: Rogue is kinda done with. Her part is almost over. As for Davis, he might still have something to do. Wolverine...don't know what to do with him. Ororo-Logan face to face, don't know what to do with that either. As for mummy dearest part, remember, she is temporarily off the team.

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 06:52 am Title: Returning

I stayed up to wait on this update and now I can go to bed a very happy woman! Good chapter to start off Logan's return. I sense that Ororo is more afraid than angry or happy of his return. I can't wait to see their actions once they're face to face!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and appreciate that you stayed up late. Ororo is very mixed up, all with the suspension and all. Face to face soon.

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