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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 07:33 am Title: Introspection

Logan has saved Rogue as he said he would always do. Gambit has new respect for Wolverine, and him and Rogue have gotten back together. What will Ororo do?

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-21-05 - 08:30 pm Title: Introspection

Can a reviewer have a writers block? =P I do think I got one.. Can’t get myself to get the thoughts running with this chapter, bah, will try harder next time :) the least I can say is, we are getting somewhere.

Author's Response: Sure, why not...Although I have read your next review and it more than makes up for ur block in this one.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-18-05 - 04:11 am Title: Introspection

This is bloody ridiculous. I'm sorry but again I feel a bit of blame shiftigni going on after this talk with Rogue. first off, I doin't know how Wolverine is supposed to assume he knows what Ro's thiking?! in the moment of anger she may want things, but he still again left, without coming back. He claimes he's waiting for a response, what about fighting for her forgiveness, not run from her. She never asked him to leave and as such he' can't claim to 'know' she wanted him to leave. She may have wanted him to leave her site now, as of course we can understand in the moment of anger. So again Wolverine is still a jerk. Secondly, the thing the sex is again brought up. Storm is not asking him to be a monk. She never I will assume say that. But are we forgeting who and for how long he slept with that person?! I mean that was a woman Storm looked to as a sister. The same woman that Storm had seen him sniff after for months on end. A woman that if she found out you were sleepign with her, would see her role in your life as nothing than a consolation prize. So please. Wolverine is far from innocent. And he better accept that and understand it, so should Rogue. And please don't hav ehim have a talking down from Rogue. she's pointless in this..this is one on one between Ro and Wolverine. Further more he has sex with that woman for what?! 4 months? On a regular basis?! While he was claiming devotion and love to Storm that's a joke. There are so many ppeople that could have sated his unsatiable need for sex. I don't know also why it's a bloody a double standard that he wanted sex and was getting sex while still claiming love, but Storm didin't do that, or have any sex at all. And she still has to be seen as a blame giver. Storm deserves an apology from Wolverien's stupidiity and she better get it, with her own spouting. This chapter did clear a bit up..but also I felt ther ewas a still blame shifting goin on....or your trying to pacify what again Wolverine and Jean did on Storm....based mainly on presumption which is still unfounded. There is no way that Wolverine is saved from jerkhood and the dog house (excuse the pun)!!!! At least we finally get to see Storm and Wolverine interact. VB

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 09:49 pm Title: Introspection

This is bloody ridiculous. I'm sorry but again I feel a bit of blame shiftigni going on after this talk with Rogue. first off, I doin't know how Wolverine is supposed to assume he knows what Ro's thiking?! in the moment of anger she may want things, but he still again left, without coming back. He claimes he's waiting for a response, what about fighting for her forgiveness, not run from her. She never asked him to leave and as such he' can't claim to 'know' she wanted him to leave. She may have wanted him to leave her site now, as of course we can understand in the moment of anger. So again Wolverine is still a jerk. Secondly, the thing the sex is again brought up. Storm is not asking him to be a monk. She never I will assume say that. But are we forgeting who and for how long he slept with that person?! I mean that was a woman Storm looked to as a sister. The same woman that Storm had seen him sniff after for months on end. A woman that if she found out you were sleepign with her, would see her role in your life as nothing than a consolation prize. So please. Wolverine is far from innocent. And he better accept that and understand it, so should Rogue. And please don't hav ehim have a talking down from Rogue. she's pointless in this..this is one on one between Ro and Wolverine. Further more he has sex with that woman for what?! 4 months? On a regular basis?! While he was claiming devotion and love to Storm that's a joke. There are so many ppeople that could have sated his unsatiable need for sex. I don't know also why it's a bloody a double standard that he wanted sex and was getting sex while still claiming love, but Storm didin't do that, or have any sex at all. And she still has to be seen as a blame giver. Storm deserves an apology from Wolverien's stupidiity and she better get it, with her own spouting. This chapter did clear a bit up..but also I felt ther ewas a still blame shifting goin on....or your trying to pacify what again Wolverine and Jean did on Storm....based mainly on presumption which is still unfounded. There is no way that Wolverine is saved from jerkhood and the dog house (excuse the pun)!!!! At least we finally get to see Storm and Wolverine interact. VB

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 09:39 pm Title: Introspection

BW--Gah! I swear. Out loud. Nononononononononono!!! Why in the hell is she even contemplating guilt? So WHAT if she said she wanted to be friends. He said "I want all of ya." You don't PROVE that point by FUCKING the girl's best friend. He's hurt cuz he smells Davis? What if Ro had enhanced senses? How fucking devestated would she be smelling Jean...or worse Mystique (the woman who Forge left with) on him???!!!?! She needs to stop he 'inner musings' and start acting like the strong-take-no-shit WOMAN she is. Fuck Guilt. She has NO reason to be guilty. If she had said "Logan, let's take it slow..." and fucked Remy, then yeah, there would be some guilt. But she DIDN't. She remained faithful to Logan. And the moment he told her he wanted more, there did, in fact, become an US. And he BETRAYED that. On every level that he could emotionallly, physically and spiritually he BETRAYED Ororo. Male logic it all you want BW, the fact is (I'm telling you this as a woman) she shouldn't be all morose about it. She should be livid, and pissed and angry. Yes, he saved Rogue (big pat on his hairy back), but he didn't bother to save THEM when he had the chance. And he had the chance everytime he CHOSE (wasn't forced) to stick his dick in another woman! (Feel free touse any of this btw, when Ro an Logan finally hash it out...if he grows the balls...anywayss, I digress from my rant...where was I...? Oh, oh yea..) He is the wrongdoer here. Not the victim, and that is exactly how you are painting him. A victim of Ororo's uncertainty. Well, fucking DUH. The one man she dared love before betrayed her, and the one man she truly loves does the same, straight outta the gate. ‘You forget Ororo,’ the internal war doesn’t seem to be letting up anytime soon. ‘You were the one who said that you would be friends until YOU were comfortable enough and that you didn’t want him to push you anything, just as you wouldn’t push him. You didn’t want anything to change, just because you were trying to prepare yourself for a relation.’ You wrote yourself, she was trying to PREPARE to give him a chance. He couldn't wait? He was that hard up? He never gave her a real chance. You can't profess love to one woman while fucking different ones. You just can't. If he was that hard up...I got only one word: MASTURBATE!! Oh, and the whole ‘I didn’t want him to leave,’ since she didn't ask him to leave (although had that been me I would have been hurricane tossing his ass to Jersey, but whatever) I don't see how she bears any guilt that the yellow bastard tucked tale and left. And then So he made things easy for you and gave you what you wanted. Bullshit. He made things easy on himself. As you can see, I didn't hold back. I expect an update (Min. 3000 words) soon!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 09:23 pm Title: Introspection

I loved Ro's POV! She's fighting with her heart and her brain and you made it come across PERFECTLY! I didn't mean to make it seem like I was disappointed with the story because that couldn't be any farther from the truth (this is one of my favs). I was just confused on what was going on between the characters, but this chapter cleared things up. It's good to know that Ro didn't have sex with that Davis guy, she needs to wait for Logan to get his mind right (if that will happen now that he knows she's close to Davis). Another great chapter & I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:41 pm Title: Introspection

beep beep beep... omg. Of course he had to hold on as long as possible, huh? Just to underline his return with some nice dramatic effects... Thanks so much for Ro's thoughts! Finally :) ... "I know ya want me" LOL! Logan came to here like that? Now that's quite a pick-up line, heh :) Love it! And now he's waking up while she's in the middle of debating with herself... Ah, what the hell, I just want them together in one room right now. Alone! So they can talk or do whatever they feel like doing.

Author's Response: Well, Rogue did have 2 F***holes in her head, along with the release of the rest of her permanent guests. A strong dose of Wolvie was needed. And I was getting reviews that I had forgotten about the main characters, even though I feel that the story is still revolving around them. What do you say? And don't worry. They will be in the same room....soon!!

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