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Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-26-06 - 07:45 pm Title: Conversations

Ororo is really fucking pissing me off! I mean I am a diehard 'Ro fan, but hell this story and specially this chapter is making me change my opinion. Get the fuck over it Storm..he slept with Jean, but he came to you to confess that he couldn't do it anymore.....(Nice job with evoking these emotions in me keep up the good work!)

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 10:59 am Title: Conversations

What about Ororo and Logan will they ever get there memories back? And should they be together as they were ment to be?

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews!! Your reviews have raised the same (and a few more questions) that the other readers put up. Just like to point out something as you read.....there is one thing that I won't reveal (even at the end). You must know by now, what that thing is. It is been left for the reader's mind to think/imagine what could have been done!!

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-01-05 - 05:28 am Title: Conversations

okay. .. having read the latest. . .maybe you shouldn't reveal what happened. my imagination is coming up with quite its own assumptions. what i am curious about now is how the healing will happen? will these two strong individuals allow themselves to trust their emotions again? though the future of logan and scott's relationship is clear, i wonder at the damage that has been done to the ororo - scott relationship. keep writing!

Author's Response: Scooter is out of the pic for now. His part in the team has been limited to one group (as explained). As for Logan and Ororo, things will come to a head...soon!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-05 - 07:21 pm Title: Conversations

Well confused, I am not (first time for everything). But I am on the verge of thinking that there *can’t* be a happy ending for this story, from my point of view it would actually lessen all that angst and mix-ups and hiccups and whatnots that has been going on :) Go for the kill I say, make us weep with a sad ending, or as I would explain to the other side of my life “I got dirt in my eye”. But never the less I *want* you to prove me wrong, that there clearly could be a happy ending. The Logan that is showing right now has got me, how should I put it.. disappointed.. perhaps it is the situation that has made him to this shadow of himself, without that oh so self-assured attitude he so previously showed. Ororo on the other hand, she shows some promise when she tries to start the dialogue, but then it felt to weak from both sides.. But it may have been enough, I never was that good at knowing such things. As to never knowing what transpired between the four, I can live with that, can they? =)

Author's Response: Well, I have written the ending and its a happy one. I don't like sad endings as such and try to avoid them....even in the fics I read. As for Logan, hopefully the final chapter will clear things up for you. As for their dialogue, both are in the dumps, and although they want to bring it out, their fears n' confusions stop them.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 10:57 pm Title: Conversations

As I said before, great story, though I’m slightly confused that’s ok. Anyway, I just have one question for you : Why the hell is ’Ro leaving with the David loser? I hated him in the comics and I hate him now. Wolvie and ’Ro are too messed to go anywhere with their relationship. ‘Ro is pulling her Ice Queen act and Wolvie is messed up beyond belief, he can’t even construct a full sentence! Ireally hope that you fix this. - Good luck and keeping on writing.

Author's Response: 'Ro leaving with David 'loser', has nothing to do with him and all to do with the story. I could just have easily used Forge, Bishop or any other male character in his place. Its just that he is the latest one, therefore I used him. Will see what to do to fix this....and even if it can be fixed....or if I want to!!

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 09:40 pm Title: Conversations

I am enjoying this story, however, I am also slightly confused. Will we every discover what was wiped from their minds? Also . . . if this is the middle of the story. . . how long is it exactly? Nice work overall.

Author's Response: I am almost sure that I won't be revealing it. I am somehow liking this confusion. If you read my other work (Marvel or DC), its usually clear cut, on the up and up. But this, this fic started at a point when all I was getting were dark-twisted thoughts, and even though I have included a couple of light moments in the beginning, things have been in keeping with the initial mood setting. As for its length....I had set it up as a oneshot, then the favorable reviews got me thinking of about a 6-7 chapter run.....and the rest, as they say is...'review' history. Its the readers, who have been the driving force behind this story.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 08:33 pm Title: Conversations

I think I just lost all hope. For both of them, everyone, the whole situation. Ro still has feelings for him. Logan is too messed up to form a coherent sentence. Too messed up to believe in himself and his feelings any longer. Everyone else is confused. And now Ro's leaving with another. White bitch and looser boy are still around but not talking. I'd completely go nuts being forced to live with them under the same roof by the way. I'd feel forced to leave. For my own sanity's sake. Because what happened must be big, big as in horrible. I'd never feel save again in their company. Never be able to trust them. And being all alone, as Logan and Ro both are right now, it must be real bad. Not knowing what happened, not knowing what memories, feelings even, are real and which are fake, not knowing whom to trust. Not knowing where to go from here... Actually I was hoping that they at least could talk things out, talk about everything and anything. But Emma and Scott took even that from them by pulling their mind raping stunt. I feel sorry for both, Ro and Logan, right now, hoping for something good coming their way.

Author's Response: See that's the interesting thing with them. Lets just hope that I can get myself out of the hole (as windrider1 said) I seem to have dug myself into. And no windy1, I didn't take the trap door out. Logan is still in the doghouse, and the false memory wasn't of what Jean and him did, but something else altogether. As for Ororo's leaving. You'll agree, things were getting to a head. she needs to take a break...seriously. I hope I can get something for them....sometime soon!!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 07:57 pm Title: Conversations

Why did you have to make me feel sorry for Wolvie?? I was hoping that they would be able to become friends after finding out what Emma/Scott did to them. By the way, what happened to Emma and Scott?? Good chapter, especially with the RoLo interaction. Good job!

Author's Response: Emma and Scott, haven't decided what to do with them. I had more in mind, but somehow, the confused state of Logan struck me, and everything else was lost. If, you notice, he seems to be talking in circles.

Reviewer: mercy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 06:20 pm Title: Conversations

please hurry and tell us what scott did to her.

Author's Response: Really!! Isn't it better to wrack yer own mind and get the freakiest thing you can think of out there!!

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