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Reviewer: stormlover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-13 - 12:38 pm Title: Closures

That was truly a rollercoaster ride of emotions. My goodness but I loved Rogue's character. Nice twists and turns and I loved the sappy ending.

Reviewer: bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-13-11 - 03:57 pm Title: Closures

Aaaah. Your work is always an emotional rollercoaster. Two chapters ago, I feared that you would end with drama and a bittersweet ending more bitter than sweet. I'm glad that they got a happy ending, because they definitely deserved one, after everything.

I have to say, that these last few chapters felt a little rushed. I wish we knew what exactly went down with Emma, Scott, Logan and Ororo. I have an inkling, but some clarity would've been appreciated. And some lead up to their wedding would've been nice - I'm not syaing entire chapters, though! Like, maybe a paragraph or two more leading up to their "happily ever after" would've been good.

... Still, that ending was very, very sweet. It's just like Logan to determine the number of kids he wants by the number of players needed for hockey.

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-10 - 06:08 pm Title: Closures

Great story not overdone with all the characters and their point of view_ I truly enjoyed it!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01-08-10 - 08:14 pm Title: Closures

Sorry did not like this story at all!!!! It was way too heavy and sad. The entire time I was reading it it made me depressed. I love ROLO and found this to be to shattering to their pairing. Even with the ending it was just too little too late!!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-04-06 - 02:33 pm Title: Closures

I loved your story! I loved all the angst between Ro and Lo. Very very good story. You wrote Kitty, Jubilee & Rogue very well, their interactions always made me chuckle. The end was a bit sappy, but hey they deserved it after all you've put them trough. ;) The whole Emma whiping out their memories was a bit weird. It didn't make too much sense, but it served its purpose in the story. Also at one point i almost felt sorry for Jean, i tend to wanna hate Jean in ROLO stories. But that's compleetly subjective. *goes of to read other stories*

Author's Response: I almost didn't write this ending...but as you said, seeing what they went through I thought they deserved it. Well, the readers went from hating Jean and feelign sorry for Scott to the other way round. You never know what comes next.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 02:17 am Title: Closures

Logan and Ororo with a daughter,son and new baby on the way.And all is right in the X-man universe. When Logan and Ororo are together in love anything is possible.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing (all the chapters)!! Love to have readers like you!!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 12:44 pm Title: Closures

Well, I must say I am impressed. Pulling out a happily ever after. I must amit, this was one of your better fics, and I did enjoy reading it--even though I rode your ass about it. One suggestion though...This story had sooooo much potential and so many dramatic angles and storylines, that it really could have gone on longer or into individual parts. With so many other fics going on, I know it was probaby hard to devote your time in that aspect. My suggestion would be taht when you get an idea like this, that could develop and grow, drop the other stories and focus on it, or write it in the background and post when it's done. That's my only gripe, that I wanted more, and I feel the ending was a bt slap-dash. Happy :D which is good!! but rushed. Otherwise a very good read. :D

Author's Response: Hey, you riding my ass....anytime babe. As for longer, this wasn't supposed to be this long, let alone more. And whatever 'extra' growth it had was due to the feedback and reviews. So, can't do the finish n' then post thing with that, can I?

Reviewer: Randi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 04:27 am Title: Closures

I loved the story, i'm so happy how it turned out. When i started reading Chapter twenty-one and i red that she had a kid, i was literally banging my head aganist my desk. I was like 'come on already, give them a break' i didn't expect that for an ending i'm so in love with the story i've already red it twice. Keep up the great work. Also can't wait for upcoming chapters for 'Ultimate Drabbles'.

Reviewer: jovanfn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 06:34 am Title: Closures

thanks for the happy ending.

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 03:29 am Title: Closures

Perfect ending! Glad to see that Ro remained "faithful" to Logan and didn't hook up with Davis. They are finally happy with each other. Great story!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 12:22 am Title: Closures

Hmm what to say.. Well for one thing, you at least showed me wrong by managing to pull of a happy/sappy ending. Quite unexpected with how the story had gone so far, I would have imagined it to go to the point of just becoming friends again and even that taking quite some time. Some questions still lie beneath the surface, though they are not of importance at least not after this ending, although the sappiness could have been brought down a notch. As for the rest? I did like the introduction of Kirika (AoA 10th anniv. rocks! Even with Jean/Logan ;)) Good enough closure to many other situations, although I would have preferred a berserking Logan handing Scott his due amount of ass-kicking, just for the hell of it. Now go forth and bring closure to your other fics too hop hop ;p

Author's Response: Well, things were getting so down in the dumps, had to do something.....even its sappy, its a perfect 180 to the end the fic. As for the ass kicking, this was primarily a drama fic, so I focussed on that. Maybe ass-kicking somewhere else!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 08:56 pm Title: Closures

OMG, my glasses work! ;) Heh. Wow, a happy ending! I can't believe it :) Thanks a lot for that, I really had lost all hope. What a great read! It had me screaming "what?!", "OMG!", "..." at quite a few points, heh. From chapter to chapter it just went worse and worse (the situation I mean) and at the same time it was harder and harder to wait for the next chapter! Even though I feared everything would just go worse and worse. But I just had to know what would come and happen next, just to be left murmuring "wha... uhm." after reading it ;) At some point I didn't want the story to have a happy ending, at least not for Logan. But then a lot of things changed and happened. I was hoping for some happyness again but didn't think it would happen. The situation just seemed so totally hopeless, everyone was lost and miserable. But again things changed. And now I'm glad this story actually has a happy ending :) Whoohoo, RoLo!

Author's Response: What did you think, they are just for show? Of course they work. Well, as things were going down on one end, they were also improving on the other, so that balanced it out. I never expected this fic to last this long!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 03:47 am Title: Closures

I'm so glad the drama is over!! Dear God...how long was that..and everyone being confused and yelling. It was a really different ending...meaning frame of endign than the way the story was going..but this is exciting! VB

Author's Response: I know, you n' windy1 really rode my ass in this one. Well, what can I say about the ending. I love this type....!!

Reviewer: xlf Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 03:46 am Title: Closures

Absolutely wonderful that's what I think!! About time for them to be happy together. But I still want to know what scott and emma did.

Author's Response: Thanks XLF. As for what Scott n' Emma did, that's like Logan's memory....gone!!

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