Now I’m almost depressed, not all that uplifting chapter. The anger and depression of the minds of those involved does get deeper in this chapter, and it’s almost manifests in the real world. Greatly written, though I sure hope we will see some sort of happy moment soon :) even a tiny one would suffice ;p

Author's Response: I had stated in the first chapter itself. Not a happy fic. Thanks for liking my work, even one with such darkness in it. As for happy moment...let me see.

This is so confusing and it's tiring my brain just trying to decipher the mess.

Author's Response: Sorry if you found it confusing. The plot and the style I have used is different from my usual fare.

I had to brush up my knowledge on this Davis person, and I would say I concur with your view perhaps, at least in a way that he was a person easily forgotten and frankly not that great a person ;p Rogue, well she got a bit temperamental there o_O it made me think that she perhaps really hates the two women Ororo/Jean now for “pushing” him away from the school. Which I do so hope is not the case concerning Ororo :) Jean I could not care less about, the only “phoenix” persona I ever liked is Rachel. Lastly; “no shopping binges” hehe major bummer for the trio :)

Author's Response: Well, I didn't want to go with the usual suspects, Forge, Bishop, Angel. So decided to get in blondie. Rogue's temperament is going to have more play in the next chapter. As for relation with Jean, that hasn't been elaborated in this fic and I am not so sure that I want to. You have to understand, Rogue knew what Logan and Ororo had going on between them....hence the anger. Jean had no committment. And, no more shopping binges. That's too fluffy for a fic like this. Already got one fluffy chapter. Not anymore.

Great work BW! Kinda mirrors RL for me right now. Miss you guy.

Author's Response: *Mirrors RL"....what did that mean? Will update soon, and also post on the forums. Later!!

I've been thinking along those lines for a while now. All I really want to hear is Storm's side, we get so much of everyone else and what their thinking but never really her. I realize she's utterly complex, because you get the impression of her based on everyone else which is varying to say the least, so to hear the way her mind works is going to be excellent. I love this new chapter, finally Storm knows. Great news! And I'm happy she learned it from Wolverine and not Jean. But this makes me wonder how Storm is going to interact with Jean because in this whole story so far the real victim is poor Scott. I wonder if Storm is going to force Jean to tell him, or their going to keep it a secret. Or if Scott will eventually find out. Now I do have one question......what does this mean: 'She sits and she prays….for herself, for him, for her and for the man sleeping in her bed. She sits and she prays' I'm trying to figure out who's the man sleeping in her bed? Who's bed? Jean's or Storms? I'm assuming not storm and Jean, but if it's jean has Scott come back? Or is that a figure of speech? VB

Author's Response: Well, I *had* said that 'Ro is going to the main character in this fic, even though she doesn't come a lot on her own. As for telling Scooter....some things are best left unsaid. And the bed is Jean's and the man is her fiance.

*shakes head at Logan*. One second he's watching his personal goddess in awe riding her winds, and the next he's telling Red good bye with a "see you tonight"... *shakes head again* He's definitely asking for a lightning bolt shoved up his sexy ass! Or what about a nice electro-shock therapy to set his brain-waves right, they seem a tiny bit out of order... *shakes head... again* :)

Author's Response: Well, if you have read the next chapter, you must know what he gets up the where....Will try and have the next chapter up by tomorrow.

"laying beside her? Where did I write that? If I did, I must have meant Scooter and Jean" Actually it was a missunderstanding from my part; "for her and for the man sleeping in her bed" I assumed it was from Ororos POV, and that she was sitting in bed. Thought I needed to clarify myself a bit. Just the jumping around that gets me sometimes, thought I was good at keeping up, seems I am not.

Author's Response: I know that some of the language in this fic. is a bit confusing. That is not from a mistake, but deliberately done so. Will try and update soon....btw, it was Scooter.

Who, what, why? So many questions so little understanding, what would make him tell her, why tell her? I understand that one would want to be on “the level” with each other but... that sort of reaction was kind of expected >_< who was the man laying beside her? Oh the pure torture of not knowing :) I do think you enjoy using flashbacks, as they seem to be a common theme sometimes. Not that it’s anything wrong with it, though I for one would prefer longer flashbacks as opposed to numerous flashbacks. Ah well, hopefully the next part will be imminent, as otherwise I will tether on the brink of frustration ;p

Author's Response: laying beside her? Where did I write that? If I did, I must have meant Scooter and Jean. As for the flashbacks, the theme of using smaller and more than one flashback in a single chapter, is only for this fic....a sort of past and present melding. Will try and post the next one soon!!