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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 12:49 am Title: Youth

Rogue,Jubilee and Kitrty should know to watch what they say Logan could ba anywhere. Logan may be gruff but he cares about those kid alot .

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 11:16 pm Title: Memories

Is'nt foreplay a great thing when it is Logan and Ororo it hurt so good. What is up with Jean and Scott? And does Ororo have some planes for her and Logan?

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 10:21 am Title: Insecurities

Gambit has Rogue he needs to worry about her, and stop thinking about Storm. And how does Ororo feel about Logan and does she know how much he loves her?

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 09:29 am Title: Trust

Logan loves Ororo and he wants to be with her but does she feel the same? Logan and Rogue love each other and trust each other just like lover's but not in a physical way more than family.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 08:50 am Title: Fantasy

Well i don't know about this would Logan act like that.I don't think so.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 12:44 pm Title: Closures

Well, I must say I am impressed. Pulling out a happily ever after. I must amit, this was one of your better fics, and I did enjoy reading it--even though I rode your ass about it. One suggestion though...This story had sooooo much potential and so many dramatic angles and storylines, that it really could have gone on longer or into individual parts. With so many other fics going on, I know it was probaby hard to devote your time in that aspect. My suggestion would be taht when you get an idea like this, that could develop and grow, drop the other stories and focus on it, or write it in the background and post when it's done. That's my only gripe, that I wanted more, and I feel the ending was a bt slap-dash. Happy :D which is good!! but rushed. Otherwise a very good read. :D

Author's Response: Hey, you riding my ass....anytime babe. As for longer, this wasn't supposed to be this long, let alone more. And whatever 'extra' growth it had was due to the feedback and reviews. So, can't do the finish n' then post thing with that, can I?

Reviewer: Randi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 04:27 am Title: Closures

I loved the story, i'm so happy how it turned out. When i started reading Chapter twenty-one and i red that she had a kid, i was literally banging my head aganist my desk. I was like 'come on already, give them a break' i didn't expect that for an ending i'm so in love with the story i've already red it twice. Keep up the great work. Also can't wait for upcoming chapters for 'Ultimate Drabbles'.

Reviewer: jovanfn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 06:34 am Title: Closures

thanks for the happy ending.

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 03:29 am Title: Closures

Perfect ending! Glad to see that Ro remained "faithful" to Logan and didn't hook up with Davis. They are finally happy with each other. Great story!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 12:22 am Title: Closures

Hmm what to say.. Well for one thing, you at least showed me wrong by managing to pull of a happy/sappy ending. Quite unexpected with how the story had gone so far, I would have imagined it to go to the point of just becoming friends again and even that taking quite some time. Some questions still lie beneath the surface, though they are not of importance at least not after this ending, although the sappiness could have been brought down a notch. As for the rest? I did like the introduction of Kirika (AoA 10th anniv. rocks! Even with Jean/Logan ;)) Good enough closure to many other situations, although I would have preferred a berserking Logan handing Scott his due amount of ass-kicking, just for the hell of it. Now go forth and bring closure to your other fics too hop hop ;p

Author's Response: Well, things were getting so down in the dumps, had to do something.....even its sappy, its a perfect 180 to the end the fic. As for the ass kicking, this was primarily a drama fic, so I focussed on that. Maybe ass-kicking somewhere else!!

Reviewer: alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 09:24 pm Title: Fantasy

there's something i don't understand: what happened between storm and summers? i missed something or you did not explain it?

Author's Response: What Scott and Emmma did, that is not revealed....its left to ur imagination.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 08:56 pm Title: Closures

OMG, my glasses work! ;) Heh. Wow, a happy ending! I can't believe it :) Thanks a lot for that, I really had lost all hope. What a great read! It had me screaming "what?!", "OMG!", "..." at quite a few points, heh. From chapter to chapter it just went worse and worse (the situation I mean) and at the same time it was harder and harder to wait for the next chapter! Even though I feared everything would just go worse and worse. But I just had to know what would come and happen next, just to be left murmuring "wha... uhm." after reading it ;) At some point I didn't want the story to have a happy ending, at least not for Logan. But then a lot of things changed and happened. I was hoping for some happyness again but didn't think it would happen. The situation just seemed so totally hopeless, everyone was lost and miserable. But again things changed. And now I'm glad this story actually has a happy ending :) Whoohoo, RoLo!

Author's Response: What did you think, they are just for show? Of course they work. Well, as things were going down on one end, they were also improving on the other, so that balanced it out. I never expected this fic to last this long!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 03:47 am Title: Closures

I'm so glad the drama is over!! Dear God...how long was that..and everyone being confused and yelling. It was a really different ending...meaning frame of endign than the way the story was going..but this is exciting! VB

Author's Response: I know, you n' windy1 really rode my ass in this one. Well, what can I say about the ending. I love this type....!!

Reviewer: xlf Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 03:46 am Title: Closures

Absolutely wonderful that's what I think!! About time for them to be happy together. But I still want to know what scott and emma did.

Author's Response: Thanks XLF. As for what Scott n' Emma did, that's like Logan's memory....gone!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-05 - 02:42 am Title: Chance

bit confused here... Where did this son come from?! What's goign on with that? Is it her's biologically...maybe when Scott raped her?! If he did? And what of this daughter of Wolverine's....is she biological? Is she Jean's kid......? Where did she come from? And Finally a bit of something from Rogue. Damn!!! She was just on too much of a pedestal....good thing she went down a peg or too..and I like Storm here. Reserved, wary...and really not wanting to be here. I hope she goes back to Africa with her son!! Wolverine could follow if she wants. But I don't want her in this drama....and I'ms ure she still has major resentment towards Jean. I have no clue why Jean is there?! How old is Storm's son?!

Author's Response: Well, had to clear up the Rogue-Ororo thing. The rest seem to have done fine, just these two were remaining. As for their children, wait till next chapter. Hope that will clear up everything and answer all your questions.

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