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Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-01-05 - 05:06 am Title: Passages

How awesome was it to write all these different types of POV? I love how the story is wrapping up & it's good to know that Ororo is on her way back to the school due to Rogue (who would have guessed)! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yup. Had to get Rogue in there. Over the fic. Remy grew to understand...even like Logan, had to do the same with Rogue.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-05 - 07:21 pm Title: Conversations

Well confused, I am not (first time for everything). But I am on the verge of thinking that there *can’t* be a happy ending for this story, from my point of view it would actually lessen all that angst and mix-ups and hiccups and whatnots that has been going on :) Go for the kill I say, make us weep with a sad ending, or as I would explain to the other side of my life “I got dirt in my eye”. But never the less I *want* you to prove me wrong, that there clearly could be a happy ending. The Logan that is showing right now has got me, how should I put it.. disappointed.. perhaps it is the situation that has made him to this shadow of himself, without that oh so self-assured attitude he so previously showed. Ororo on the other hand, she shows some promise when she tries to start the dialogue, but then it felt to weak from both sides.. But it may have been enough, I never was that good at knowing such things. As to never knowing what transpired between the four, I can live with that, can they? =)

Author's Response: Well, I have written the ending and its a happy one. I don't like sad endings as such and try to avoid them....even in the fics I read. As for Logan, hopefully the final chapter will clear things up for you. As for their dialogue, both are in the dumps, and although they want to bring it out, their fears n' confusions stop them.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 10:57 pm Title: Conversations

As I said before, great story, though I’m slightly confused that’s ok. Anyway, I just have one question for you : Why the hell is ’Ro leaving with the David loser? I hated him in the comics and I hate him now. Wolvie and ’Ro are too messed to go anywhere with their relationship. ‘Ro is pulling her Ice Queen act and Wolvie is messed up beyond belief, he can’t even construct a full sentence! Ireally hope that you fix this. - Good luck and keeping on writing.

Author's Response: 'Ro leaving with David 'loser', has nothing to do with him and all to do with the story. I could just have easily used Forge, Bishop or any other male character in his place. Its just that he is the latest one, therefore I used him. Will see what to do to fix this....and even if it can be fixed....or if I want to!!

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 09:40 pm Title: Conversations

I am enjoying this story, however, I am also slightly confused. Will we every discover what was wiped from their minds? Also . . . if this is the middle of the story. . . how long is it exactly? Nice work overall.

Author's Response: I am almost sure that I won't be revealing it. I am somehow liking this confusion. If you read my other work (Marvel or DC), its usually clear cut, on the up and up. But this, this fic started at a point when all I was getting were dark-twisted thoughts, and even though I have included a couple of light moments in the beginning, things have been in keeping with the initial mood setting. As for its length....I had set it up as a oneshot, then the favorable reviews got me thinking of about a 6-7 chapter run.....and the rest, as they say is...'review' history. Its the readers, who have been the driving force behind this story.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 08:33 pm Title: Conversations

I think I just lost all hope. For both of them, everyone, the whole situation. Ro still has feelings for him. Logan is too messed up to form a coherent sentence. Too messed up to believe in himself and his feelings any longer. Everyone else is confused. And now Ro's leaving with another. White bitch and looser boy are still around but not talking. I'd completely go nuts being forced to live with them under the same roof by the way. I'd feel forced to leave. For my own sanity's sake. Because what happened must be big, big as in horrible. I'd never feel save again in their company. Never be able to trust them. And being all alone, as Logan and Ro both are right now, it must be real bad. Not knowing what happened, not knowing what memories, feelings even, are real and which are fake, not knowing whom to trust. Not knowing where to go from here... Actually I was hoping that they at least could talk things out, talk about everything and anything. But Emma and Scott took even that from them by pulling their mind raping stunt. I feel sorry for both, Ro and Logan, right now, hoping for something good coming their way.

Author's Response: See that's the interesting thing with them. Lets just hope that I can get myself out of the hole (as windrider1 said) I seem to have dug myself into. And no windy1, I didn't take the trap door out. Logan is still in the doghouse, and the false memory wasn't of what Jean and him did, but something else altogether. As for Ororo's leaving. You'll agree, things were getting to a head. she needs to take a break...seriously. I hope I can get something for them....sometime soon!!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 07:57 pm Title: Conversations

Why did you have to make me feel sorry for Wolvie?? I was hoping that they would be able to become friends after finding out what Emma/Scott did to them. By the way, what happened to Emma and Scott?? Good chapter, especially with the RoLo interaction. Good job!

Author's Response: Emma and Scott, haven't decided what to do with them. I had more in mind, but somehow, the confused state of Logan struck me, and everything else was lost. If, you notice, he seems to be talking in circles.

Reviewer: mercy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-05 - 06:20 pm Title: Conversations

please hurry and tell us what scott did to her.

Author's Response: Really!! Isn't it better to wrack yer own mind and get the freakiest thing you can think of out there!!

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-27-05 - 08:52 pm Title: Revelations

Well, i just have to say first off that this story is fantastic. After reading the story this is what i Initially thought. And this is possiably the worst thing that can happen causing 'Ro to hate men. But Scott raped 'Ro, and she couldn't fight him off because of she started to remember when she got raped when she was younger and she felt so helpless.... and then.... Wolverine hears her whimpers and cries and comes and helps her.. but something happens... who knows your the author you'll probably think of something great...

Author's Response: As to what Scott did, I am almost decided in that I am NOT going to specify what exactly he did. Afterall, in real life, you don't get to know everything. Saying that, your idea is very intriguing. Maybe I'll use it somewhere else!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-25-05 - 05:33 pm Title: Revelations

Scott would never do this--bah, make him dance I say! :) As you have not shown us what was done and given the permission to say what we *think* may have happened, well I will of course give my interpretation of the whole thing, heh. I was pretty close at least in thinking Scott would have had Emma to make them forget something, what I could not be sure of. But I am almost in consensus with “everyone else” when believing it has something to do with Scott doing something to Ororo; the only obvious thing being rape, as it involved doing something to Logan to.. But then that does not take Logan out of the “doghouse” as some have put it, it would just make Ororo trust men less. What did they do to Logan? There must be something more.. What that is? I would say: Overly horny ^^; and perhaps direct his libido towards Jean? >_< That way Ororo would get another issue to deal with that was more “present” then whatever Scott did do to her. But that does not resolve the Ororo issue any more either… Bah! I get headaches from thinking of this line of reasoning. Give me answers, I think my head will explode otherwise.. :p

Author's Response: I agree with you...100%. Logan is still in the doghouse and will stay there...for god knows how long. Will try to get some answers in the next update!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-25-05 - 07:59 am Title: Revelations

What the hell did he do to Ro? ... Must be something Logan could have smelled/sensed. So, let's see. What if the kiss between Ro and Scott wasn't just a kiss. Mmh. Logan would have sensed if Scott and Ro had sex. But would Ro have sex with Scott? I don't think so. So he must have forced her. But she would have fried his ass if he tried to do such a thing! That means he must have done somthing to her to get what he wanted... Okay, the ugliest theory I can come up with is: Scott drugged Ro, raped her -and if that's not ugly enough- she got pregnant and he made her get rid of the child. So there! That's my theory ;) Or is that too "freaky weird"? LOL Hey, there must be a reason why Emma locked her own memories away as well. It must really be something ugly. Or she's just messing with them again... Okay, maybe the pregnant-part is a bit too much ;D Did they alter Beast's memories as well? He too has enhanced senses.

Author's Response: Whatever he did or didn't do...I am not going to say. It maybe that Emma is telling a lie....who knows? Even she only knows that she did something...what, gone.

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-25-05 - 12:17 am Title: Revelations

Did Scott do something to Ororo? Hmm.... honestly I have no idea what's going on, but I thought I'd give it a shot! Update soon, so I can see if I was right!

Author's Response: You can think whatever you want. I am going to leave this point here. Not everything in life is cleared up. There are always some murky instances.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-05 - 11:12 pm Title: Revelations

Gah, Bats. What'd you go and do? You took the trap door out of the hole you dug yourself in. I just knew you were gonna play the whole false memory card the second Logan became unredeemable (and he was). Grr. I'd rather have seen Logan struggle to overcome his flaws for the woman he loves than see you make a scapegoat of Scooter, hell even emma deserves better character treatment. Where to next?

Author's Response: No windy, no trap doors here. Logan is still in the doghouse as far as Ororo is concerned. The Scooter-Emma thing was just a sid plot to get things even more confusing. Everything is clearing up. Rogue-Remy done, Scooter-Emma-Jean, kinda done. All that is left is 'Ro and Logan. And Emma, never gonna get any better than this...as far as I am concerned is a Grade-A Sl*t.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-05 - 09:15 pm Title: Revelations

Did Scott rape Ro? That bastard! And why shift Logan's memory..what shifted?! Did he sleep with Jean or was that a false memory...or maybe not?! VB

Author's Response: I am not saying anything. This suspense is completely upto the reader to interpret. Think whatever you want. And as for the Jean-Logan thing...true!!

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-05 - 11:06 am Title: Deception

I actually think I could fathom what Emma and Scott could have done against the two, although to say it would ruin it for others, and I could be wrong to >_< It will be fun to see if my thoughts are as equally confusing as yours. Keep the pace with this one ;p

Author's Response: I would like to know what was your guess. If possible post it in a review!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-05 - 07:00 am Title: Deception

Okay, I'm officially lost here. What's going on?! I have no clue... 0.o I hope the next update is in the works already, because I need to know!

Author's Response: Hope it helped out. It was a bolt from the blue for me too.

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