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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:41 pm Title: Introspection

beep beep beep... omg. Of course he had to hold on as long as possible, huh? Just to underline his return with some nice dramatic effects... Thanks so much for Ro's thoughts! Finally :) ... "I know ya want me" LOL! Logan came to here like that? Now that's quite a pick-up line, heh :) Love it! And now he's waking up while she's in the middle of debating with herself... Ah, what the hell, I just want them together in one room right now. Alone! So they can talk or do whatever they feel like doing.

Author's Response: Well, Rogue did have 2 F***holes in her head, along with the release of the rest of her permanent guests. A strong dose of Wolvie was needed. And I was getting reviews that I had forgotten about the main characters, even though I feel that the story is still revolving around them. What do you say? And don't worry. They will be in the same room....soon!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:33 pm Title: Returning

Thanks for the dedication! :) And I'm back with my reviews as you might have noticed already... Just ignore them if they appear a bit confused right now :) So Logan spent all this time in the woods on his own? ... nice! I like that. He's pretty sexy in this feral state. But what's wrong now between Scott and Jean? I'm seriously thinking I missed something. Aw, damn Ro! Why do you have to be so mature? Why didn't you just let him explain why you got suspended? Hmpf... :)

Author's Response: I am answering your reviews as you type them. Glad could catch u at the same time. The Jeannie-Scooter thing and Ororo, Scooter, Emma suspension will be highlighted...soon!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:26 pm Title: Threats

Firstly: They are getting Logan! Yay! ... even though I would have liked him crawling back to Ro or something ;) Secondly: O.o... I'd like me some Sabretooth in my head! And now seriously: Scott, Emma and Ro suspended? Whoa. Did I miss something? What exactly happened? ...

Author's Response: *Sabertooth in my head*...you must really bw sick. The suspension will be cleared soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:20 pm Title: Musings

Okay, so now they are married... yay. Where's Logan? Is he coming back anytime soon? I do hope so... I really need some RoLo, even if it's a big fight between them :) I don't care, I just need some RoLo! He shouldn't have run away... she should have stopped him, should have fried his ass... But wait, that has nothing to do with this chap, heh. Sorry, I'm having problems right now keeping my thoughts together. Even typing this takes me quite some time. Maybe I should just write in German, heh :) At least I would be able to understand myself then... Uhm, where was I? ... I liked the Professor's point of view. He just wants the best for everyone, tries to help where he is able to but doesn't want to pry and refuses to peek into their heads to get the answers he needs. He knows a lot, has known everyone for a long time but still doesn't know the details. The details I need to know btw! I'm getting antsy... so many questions but so few answers.

Author's Response: Logan is back. You will see from the next chapter onwards. Hope you get well soon. Have been sick myself, the sudden weather change and an abrupt konking off of the heater caused it. The Professor is from the movieverse and is a good guy. No ulterior motives like the guy from the Ultimateverse.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-17-05 - 08:11 pm Title: Union

Nice to get some more info about the motivations and reasons that let to the things that happened. Jean came back, Scott turned towards another with his problems and fears, everyone was sort of afraid of her except him. Logan was the only one not afraid so she turned to him... He still should not have given in though... Mmh, I'm wondering what's the deal with Emma. More and more people seem to be involved in all this. It's becoming one huge interwoven thing... What's Emma's part? Or did she just listen to Scott hoping he would turn away from Jean more and more until finally finding interst in her? She's a telepath after all... she didn't do anything nasty, did she?

Author's Response: You sumarized very succiently. The deal with Emma...I have a general idea on where I want this fic to go for an ending. Just have to fill in certain blanks. Emma is one of them, the suspension I have set up is another. I just hope that I don't get tangled in my own web.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 07:46 pm Title: Returning

I would say its still too soon to get a glimpse at where this is finally going, as I am confused in the sense that I do not know what is going on (no surprise there though;)… But answers will come, but I don’t want or have the patience to wait for the next chapters, heh. Story wise, it’s already been said, a good neutral chapter or rather a chapter without any bigger confrontations or outbursts (darn). I actually got a bit worried I had the wrong story for just a sec there. About the return of Wolverine, other then the fact that I want to see more of RoLo and a helluva (sorry for the language) solution to this “little” situation, there is not much more to say ^^ (feel the pressure;) just for information; I don’t really like Scooter as a character, I do sort of respect him though.. Other then that he’s just that character that Wolverine taunts and messes with and so forth.

Author's Response: I am kinda ready to wind this down, hence Logan's return. No use in excess angst. I seem to have done enough. Three couples man. Five people, Scooter, Jeannie, Emma, Ororo and Logan, and all types of pairings. Whew. Will see what to do with Ororo and Logan.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 06:56 pm Title: Returning

BW-->Hmmm....I'll give you a break...for now. I'm still not liking how Rogue-centric this fic is, or the fact that Storm seems to be in serene mode. I see her giving a little hell in return. For the love of all that is RoLo DO NOT let Logan off lightly!!!! For cripes sake he banged Jean and Mystique!! Seriously, the man needs to suffer. (Not just overall--specifically related to Ororo.) I'm not a huge Davis fan, but anything to make Logan pay for what he did. :D Otherwise than that, good update. I expect another one soon---and no bitchin' about me updating. I have my reasons. (I will update soon, however.) ;)

Author's Response: The Rogue-centricity is because she has the inside deal on Logan, even things that he might not say out loud. Think of her as his PR person. Lets see how you like the new chapter.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 07:15 am Title: Returning

Hmmm...... I'm unsure. I still want to know what's up with Rogue now..and I hope that Cameron guy can take a backseat. Wolverine has redeemed himself a bit. But you seem to forget, he still ran away. And I want Storm to remind him of that. This is not about forgiveness any more. You don't run away you persevere. You fight against the anger and you find resolution, you beg, you plead.....you do all you can so she can be reminded of who you are and were to them. But did he do that? No....he left, leaving all that anger that was to be let out, to fester and build up. I think Wolverine has tons to answer for. And this is a good neutral chapter. I'm still looking on finding out on Storm. Her thoughts, and of course the energey there. I wonder how this is going to be played out in the end. I do want her response to Wolverine to be volatile, as I'm sure it will be. I'm also a bit scared as to Storm and Wolverine's story taking a backseat to Rogue. It's so significant that not to give it's due is silly, and makes the direction pointless. But to give it much importance, then we take away from Storm and Wolverine and that is extremely important. I'm still not liking the role of Ro to mommy dearest. She's a passionate woman, and to marginalize her chracter to mummy with a few outings with Cameron is sad. Furthermore Jean should be doing it, I still don' know why she's been demoted and I'd like to know. But I think Jean should get some practice in! Anyway awaiting the next chappie...as Wolverine comes back...I better see Cameron in it...and what you plan on doing with that waste of pink flesh(I believe this is a quote from abomination a comic character)! VB

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 07:11 am Title: Returning

Hmmm...... I'm unsure. I still want to know what's up with Rogue now..and I hope that Cameron guy can take a backseat. Wolverine has redeemed himself a bit. But you seem to forget, he still ran away. And I want Storm to remind him of that. This is not about forgiveness any more. You don't run away you persevere. You fight against the anger and you find resolution, you beg, you plead.....you do all you can so she can be reminded of who you are and were to them. But did he do that? No....he left, leaving all that anger that was to be let out, to fester and build up. I think Wolverine has tons to answer for. And this is a good neutral chapter. I'm still looking on finding out on Storm. Her thoughts, and of course the energey there. I wonder how this is going to be played out in the end. I do want her response to Wolverine to be volatile, as I'm sure it will be. I'm also a bit scared as to Storm and Wolverine's story taking a backseat to Rogue. It's so significant that not to give it's due is silly, and makes the direction pointless. But to give it much importance, then we take away from Storm and Wolverine and that is extremely important. I'm still not liking the role of Ro to mommy dearest. She's a passionate woman, and to marginalize her chracter to mummy with a few outings with Cameron is sad. Furthermore Jean should be doing it, I still don' know why she's been demoted and I'd like to know. But I think Jean should get some practice in! Anyway awaiting the next chappie...as Wolverine comes back...I better see Cameron in it...and what you plan on doing with that waste of pink flesh(I believe this is a quote from abomination a comic character)! VB

Author's Response: Rogue is kinda done with. Her part is almost over. As for Davis, he might still have something to do. Wolverine...don't know what to do with him. Ororo-Logan face to face, don't know what to do with that either. As for mummy dearest part, remember, she is temporarily off the team.

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-05 - 06:52 am Title: Returning

I stayed up to wait on this update and now I can go to bed a very happy woman! Good chapter to start off Logan's return. I sense that Ororo is more afraid than angry or happy of his return. I can't wait to see their actions once they're face to face!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and appreciate that you stayed up late. Ororo is very mixed up, all with the suspension and all. Face to face soon.

Reviewer: Jamie B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-05 - 08:56 pm Title: Threats

This story is all over the place...and I love it! It is so interesting because you can't decipher the "bad" and "good" guys of the story. Everyone has secrets and sneaky ideas (once again, I love this). Now with Wolverine coming back, this will get VERY exciting, especially between him, Rogue and Ororo. I agree with the other reviewers as in Ororo leaving for awhile. Things have gotten too complicated at the school and she might need to leave to let the "steam escape". Another great chapter, I'll be checking for an update soon!

Author's Response: I had planned this as a oneshot, but the reviews encouraged me to poke at it, and look where it has got us. Wolverine's back, but a lot has happened in the time he has been away. As for Ororo, the latest update is all about her.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-05 - 07:58 pm Title: Threats

I am so lost as to what's going on it's...not funny...I'll wait until chapter 13. I don't know what I'm supposed to be looking for....Was Xavier the one that was stuck inside where ever?! Why does this fic get more about Rogue, as we go into it? I hope she gets to attack Storm though....then Storm can go away for a vacation. And why Jean in charge and not Storm? Are they in some way blaming Storm and Cyclops for what happened to Rogue! I don't get it! Well it's fine. I mean I guess Storm and Cyclops are going to be blamed, especially by Wolverine as to the events that occured. And their already under suspension. I mean Emma is to blame, and the only way I see Sabretooth entering Rogue's mind is if she touched him. I don't know how Stom was supposed to 'protect' Rogue. Nor do I know how the poor Cyck was supposed to do anything. Again this is an oh well situation. I do hope though that Storm hasn't been sleeping with baffoon the surfer guy. Though I can't see her sleeping with him....she looks like one of those long engagement kind of people. so it would take close to a year if not longer for her to be sure of the relationship....especially since she's been hurt so many times in the past. I'm a bit upset that it had to take somethign like this to bring Wolverine back. He still seems weak to me because of it. He'd only come back for this but not for any other reason. It then makes me wonder if he'd come back for Storm. It actually proves to me he wouldn't come back if instead it was Storm who was hurt. he wouldn't be able to do anything for her. So no one would call him. And I doubt Rogue would do anything for Storm or call Wolverine for her..since she herself said that Storm is to blame. (Which I still don't see!). It will also be interesting to see if Rogue does try to kill Storm. I wonder how that will play out. I do think she'd get her licks in and hurt Storm badly. She has both telepathic ability now, as well as some serious strength and there's the healing factor. Again why Jean in charge?! Well why not, now that I think about it. Storm and Cycke seem to be the enemy in this fic...let's make everyone against them. And now that rogue is hurt, and Remy is back with Rogue. He I'm sure is goign to jump on the bandwagon and shun Storm as well as Cycke. Can Storm just leave?! I mean really...there's nothing here for her. A man claims he loves her, but he runs away and was spending time fucking behind her back for a long period of time her best friend ( a woman she looked to as a sister). Now he's going to come back, for a girl who hates her. Keeping in mind he's not coming back for Storm. And it seems that Storm is partly to blame for what's happened to the girl, so then he'll be angry. Her best male friend, might probably be hating her or angry with her for what happened to said girl. Then we have said girl hating her, having also taken in 2 enemies of Storm, and now will want her dead. Can it get any worse?! Sure, and then she's with a man who's really a baffoon. She's been demoted from co-leader for what happened to girl (which I don't get). And a man she looked to as a father figure, was the one to demote her and he seemed livid with her and Scott. At this point, Storm if she leaves, is not running away. She needs a break. I mean I don't think anyone could feel normal under all that drama. She needs to pick up and go without a word to anyone..cause it's none of their business. I think storm is above kiling herself, but with all this angry, anxiety , and hatred projecting towards her....I'd leave. And get rid of the surfer guy. I mean I would take anyone with storm over Wolverine. But you and I both know that she could do better... Again can I get some POV or something from Storm. I mean this ain't rightt hat everyone seems to have a say..but she's looked too as a Jezebel. VB

Author's Response: The surfer guy...well, his part is still not clear to even me. What I had in mind, didn't quite gel with this new development. So, will have to rethink him. As for the whole Emma, Scooter, 'Ro jumble up, it all starts in the next chapter. As for leaving, someone is sure going to. The next chapter will involve everyone from Storm to Wolverine. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Pats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-05 - 04:55 pm Title: Threats

Rubbing hands together in anticipation, and grinning, "It's about time!" This was great! Like watching a movie! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the support. Will have the next chapter up soon.

Reviewer: Pats Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-05 - 04:47 pm Title: Musings

I thought you captured Charles well, my friend. Very good, as always lease keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks Pats!! Was my first time in dealing with the Professor. Usually, I use him as a token character, but not in this one.

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Date: 11-15-05 - 04:40 pm Title: Union

This was well written, and as you know I do not care for Scott or Jean that much but this was good. Thanks for sharing, BW!

Author's Response: Well, things for both of them are going as a yo-yo, as is clear in my latest update....and it is still not over.

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