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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 02:52 am Title: Secret Surprise

I figured it was X23. Bobby is a riot, one-track mind.

Reviewer: XLF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-05 - 03:20 am Title: Secret Surprise

Oh my!!! now I just have to know what your up to and who's who

Author's Response: Well, I am marking out the characters as and when I introduce them. Have about a half a dozen new ones, just have to get their positioning right.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-05 - 05:23 am Title: Secret Surprise

No no no...Take your time with RoLo, just to see them in similar scenes would be enough to soothe my appetite. This story is absolutely amazing. I have nothing else to say about that. I love that you have so many characters. Nick Fury (personal fave) damn it you even brought in Dazzler, to me she's normally in the trailer park for unused mutants like Cloak and Dagger. This absolutely excellent. I so want to see where this is going. And Stormy is so how fuckin' cool? I wonder if she has hand to hand combat experience, I'd like to see her in a fight with Wolverine. That would be interesting! Actually I like that Storm is a woman of few words and I also like the fact that she's sort of a strong, silent personality resonating in the fic. I find that Jean talks a lot, but over all this is great. I also like how Rogue AND Jubilee are like his kids, as Jubilee always should be! So this is defintely most welcome. I also like this team sort of think with Beast and also ELektra, all we need is Black Cat and you've got a whole mess of trouble. Wow!!! I really just can't wait for the progression of this fic. And I can predict that this fic is probably going to be the longest fic ever, most definitely hitting the 150+ (of course if carried correctly) chapter size. Nice set up! This is going to be a great saga. Can't wait for the next update! VB

Author's Response: Glad you like my cahracter portrayal...even Rogue, huhn. Let me see if I can get Black Cat in this one, even thouhg she has not direct link with Wolverine. As for number of chapters, haven't decided yet, altough your number is a tad bit more than what I would use for a single fic. Maybe break it up into 2 or 3 parts.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 10:04 pm Title: Secret Surprise

I guessed while reading that it was Beast. I was right, yay! LOL "You got Beast-ed" :D Heh, that's a great one! Like I said before, I love the team-ups here. Everyone is so afraid of Wolverine, heh. Must be pretty scary to know only a handfull of unproofed "facts" about him, having not even a photograph or anything else to clearly identify him. He seems to be shielded from telepaths as well. In a mass of people he could be anyone and they probably wouldn't even know it if he was standing right in front of them. Or even more scary, right behind them, heh :) Can't wait to read more! This is really, really good!

Author's Response: Yup. Got that 'Beast-ed' thing just while writing. As for Wolverine's shielding against the telepaths, have got some plans on that too. As for his secrecy in a crowd, that won't matter soon, as he will be meeting the X-Men. Wil update soon. Just have to get an update for Cleansing and Survival out of the way.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 06:10 pm Title: Secret Surprise

nice chapter plz base fury in the flying fortress i always liked it better

Author's Response: I liked the fortress too. Will be using that, although may have a permanent structure for some of their activities.

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