i ws wondering how long till an up date its to good a story to leave it hanging

Author's Response: I will continue this soon. Just finishing with 'Cleansing', and soon with 'In Plain Sight'. Then will get back to this.

Actually I was following it as Storm in the movie and then Storm maybe in X2. Kind of her development. But comic base is cool. I liked this chapter of course. I needed to know about Storm, now I have to wait until Wolvie comes back or until Storm develops a relationship with X23 and Jubilee. And are you going to give more humanoid characteristics to X23? Right now I'm just picturing a robot, with no real essence to her! Short but sweet. Oh and any more Gambit/Ro moments? By the way I wasn't happy how xavier, scott, and Jean talked about Storm. I was hoping they give her a bit of credit....But then this is Xavier he's always doing something that I question. He always thinks he knows best.

Author's Response: I don't like any of the movie characters all that much, except for Xavier and Rogue. So the Storm and Wolverine I write about, almost always have characteristics from their comic counterparts. As for X23, you should check out the limited series (or full series) of hers, the uncanny x-men repesentation and the evolution cartoon series. She is quite robotic in some ways and bonds with very few people and is even more closed than Logan in some ways. Understand that she is just started her life as a person. She was just a weapon until a couple of years ago. An' no, no Gambit/Ro moments, especially not any romantic or intimate ones. Gambit is younger than Ororo and if he does any overt flirting, it will be with the younger cast....and then too there is a chance of X gutting him...just for the principal of the thing. As for your view on Xavier, Scooter and Jeannie, I still haven't revealed everything. SO, don't be in a rush to diss on them. And the Professor I am writing about is more of a movieverse + evoverse guy and definitely not from the newer x-men series and ultimateverse series.